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| Xeno the Hedgehog 2006-10-15 ch 6,  | abuseI hate it when a fic this good is left unfinished. What happens to him? does he ever find the other raptors? Do they accept him? where else does he go? what else does he encounter? I WANT ANSWERS! |
| Bob Bennit 2005-01-30 ch 6, | abuseI like this...I wish you'd update soon... |
| Alan 2005-01-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseChapter one review - A very gripping fanfic. I almost missed dinner to read this chapter! I love the dino/failed experiment point of view. Just a question: Will Talon run into a Tyrannosaurus Rex? I hope so. I personally think that this is one of the top ten best of the Jurassic Park fanfictions on this site. On a less important note, I'm thinking of doing a fanfiction for Jurassic Park. (Under a different name.) I most likely won't do it, but still, for any sake, what do you think of this: Soon after JURASSIC PARK, a large group of army personnel are sent to Isla Nublar to destroy the remaining dinosaurs, but it turns out to be harder than they expected. Please tell me if you like it. |
| duckmasta2020 2004-05-06 ch 6, | abusekeep it up plz thnx! good work! |
| Tallacus 2003-09-13 ch 5, | abuseI'm a raptor lover, and I'm very impressed by this story. |
| jd burns 2003-09-05 ch 4, | abuseUm...oh-oh! *g* Sounds like the plot is thickening to me. |
| jd burns 2003-09-05 ch 6, | abuseYou are going to continue this story soon, aren't you? You're leaving it at a cliffhanger!! |
| jd burns 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuse'Kay, I have to admit that I was a little confused there for a second, but then I figured out that you were writing from the perspective of the dinosaur. Is that correct? |
| Thesseli 2003-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, I will be finishing this (hopefully soon!) -- I'm just in the middle of another story that I need to finish first. :) |
| Yami 2003-07-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseLol...I reviewed this once before, very orrigional JP fic. Are there any new chapters coming up? |
| The Dream Master 2003-04-25 ch 3, | abuseawesome. Already reviewed once, but i read this again, and hope you update soon |
| The Dream Master 2003-04-25 ch 4, | abuseGood so far. Can't wait for updates. Im on the edge of my seat, so hope to read more on this when its updated. Hurry on writing, i want to know about Talon's identity, and why he was created. Keep writing. |
| boysetsfire 2003-04-23 ch 4, anon. | abuselol. best JP fic I've read in a while. Please keep writing. |
| Giren 2003-04-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseThe only problem here is that the chapters are so short. Its still a cool fic, keep up the good writing. |
| Raptor - X1 2003-04-14 ch 1, | abuseoh! getting good! :) keep writing! i like it! only one problem : the chapters should be twice as long |