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| Deanna/Angel 2004-02-12 ch 10, | abuseaw i like the ending.,... hell i like the whole thing ,it was good ,sweet ,funny, cute, and i could go on all day but i don't want to waste ur time. so i will just say I Liked it. (alot) Deanna:) |
| Ilvinaeda 2004-01-07 ch 10, | abuseNice story! I read it in two separate parts...sorry about not reviewing earlier, but I figured since you finished this one, I'd just read it all first. Anyhow, the plot is cool! I don't think you'd be making a follow-up, would ya...? Either way, this story would have been a nice stand-alone for Nick and Mika... ^_^ Good work! Keep writing! |
| akaStrobe 2003-08-23 ch 4, | abusethis is a reminder for me to finish reading this later |
| Abisian 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abusei like it! so much, in fact, i'll put you on both favorites lists ^_^ it started fast, but that's always okay, as long as your character doesn't turn out a mary-sue. from reading your summary i would have thought the woman would have been milly. i'm not disappointed or anything, i'm just a very firm believer in the M/W thing. ja ne! |
| Matt R Green 2003-06-07 ch 9, | abuseYou do a great job in betray Nick's character in a story like this one. !Good Work! |
| tragichero-spike 2003-05-27 ch 9, | abuseI must say, this fic is nearly flawless! It practicaly reminds me of an episode. I'm sure the ending wil be just as great as the rest. I'll be sad when this ends to, WHY DO ALL THE GOOD THINGS HAVE TO END!?!!??! FIRST BEBOP, THEN TRIGUN, AND NOW THIS! The pinch of Lemony goodness is a nice added effect too. Mika seems to be the female equivalent of Nick, without te Corsspunisher, the church hat thingy, the ciggarets, the stubble, and the whole preacher thing. Good luck with your writing! See you space cowboy... |
| Xi Hou Jun 2003-05-13 ch 6, | abuseEvil, evil cliffhanger, hehe. (I'm one to talk.) *thinking of Nick being "dressed for the occasion"* *passes out* Now that I've gotten that over with--fantastic chapter. (See, I didn't miss it this time.) It's obvious that you know what you are doing. ;-) |
| Xi Hou Jun 2003-05-13 ch 5, | abuseMika has such good lines! I've cheered for her so much while reading this, I feel like I need pompoms. (I've always wanted to tell someone, "Let's step outside and settle this like real men." Unfortunately, it's hard to find real men to say it to, LOL.) I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner, but, apparently, I didn't hit author alert when I meant to. *smacks self around for a while* @_@ |
| The Rogue Shadow 2003-05-03 ch 4, | abuseThis story's pretty good... It's a good thing I already accidently found out that Nick would die otherwise I would probably be a little sour about it. Still it's good to know that there are people who won't take "He's dead. Let's move on." for an answer. I still don't really get where he is know. I thought he was dead, so how can he donate money? I'm sure it'll be explained later though. You got a nice character there too. You don't really see many of Mika's kind these days. Only thing I'm kinda questioning about is the small relationship developing. It seems that it's happening a little easy. You should toss in a conflict or something. Maybe you can make Nick remember Millie even though his memory's mostly at a loss. Well it's your call! So keep up the good work and I'll continue to cheer you on! P.S. You might get more reviews if you would allow anonymous reviewers to post. ^_^ |
| cdkobasiuk 2003-05-02 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really good fic. It not "typical" to coin a phrase. I like how you characterise Nick. Great job so far. Cat |
| Suburban Slasher 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseIt must be wonderful, not having a conscience. Doesn't matter that there are people who were irrevocably spoiled by you blabbing about Ep. 23 in your title summary, does it? |
| Xi Hou Jun 2003-04-29 ch 3, | abusePrimo writing. The dialogue is snappy, the atmosphere is perfect, and your word choice borders on divinely inspired. ;-) I feel like I'm standing in the room with the characters as they interact. |