I don't k ow why you don't have more review on this! This is a really fantastic story. I don't reply like the pair of Rourk and Helga, but you did it very well! I know this is N olde fix but I just had to review. Amazing work!

This story is awesome. I like it a lot.

Hiya, Julie...Gabe here again to praise you for another GREAT Atlantis fanfic :D! Gads, you're such a great writer and you definitely know how to write and flesh out characters such as Helga and Rourke. I LOVE the past you gave them :)! It shows how they ended up where they did in the movie Atlantis.

First off, i feel so bad for Helga :(. She's loved Rourke all her life and he did nothing but use her and manipulate her and break her heart. That bastard! Like that part in the story where she caught him with another girl...OUCH! That stung and that stung good. Helga so did not deserve a guy like that. She deserved Christopher, but Rourke took care of him too :(. Poor poor gal. If only she saw Rourke for who he really really really was. If only she didn't fall for his charms (ya gotta admit...the guy sure was a bastard, but he's got that macho thing goin' on).

At least in the end, she was the one who survived :D! yay! i'm really glad that you let her live at the end of your fic :)! Helga deserves a second chance. I did kinda wish Rourke would change his ways and really marry her, but i guess it's too late for that now :(.

I can't believe you have so little reviews for this story! It is spectacular! I loved the emotion and the sense of reality to it! Can't wait to ready the others!

I'm really, really liking this story so far. But then I already told you that. My favorite line so far is "GET HER!" Those are two words that every male should know will make them into a human punching bag.

I loved Helga standing in the middle of a ring of on lookers incouraging her would be assailants on in their domed endevor of conquest.

It was also a very cool way to introduce Rourke.

Why havent many people reviewed? This was amazing! I loved reading every part. It was like a real book. Im very pleased that there are writers like you here, instead of teenyboppers trying to be deep and failing miserably.

O...First comment! Yay! *Does a little dance*
Anyways, just wanted to tell you that I thought your story was absolutely awesome, and kinda confused as to why no one has commented on it...
Keep up the good work...and please...write more!
Fanficchick