interesting I hope this lanacan dies.

Please Bring on your Final Chapter Soon I Hope

C'mon man, Ash is the main character, he's gotta defeat Lanacan. After all, in the end there can be only one. And unfortunately, it isn't Lanacan. Another silly @$$ question, who's the watcher in this?

Okay. This chapter was a good one. Ash is regretting that he is immortal. He misses Misty so much. But I am glad he is immortal so he can kill Lanacan without getting hurt. This has become one great story. Keep on going. ^-^

YAY! That was exciting. Megan found Lanacan and they are fighting. I hope Ash will get a chance to fight Lanacan so he can be with Misty again. *sigh* This is a good story.

This was very interesting. The plot thickens. Lanacan is up to something, and it is not good. Anyway keep on going with this. ^-^

It's so sab and nerve racking but i was wondering should'nt this be wait no no crossover is with both chars anyway great storyy damn that sucks to be immortal no babies

Sounds like Lanacan wants Ash's head since he's a rookie immortal for now. But something tells me Ash will take his head before Lanacan takes.

Yikes...this is cutting it too close for Lanacan.

Uh oh...it's starting to look like that Cat-guy from the first episode of Highlander all over again. Lanacan's planning to kidnap Misty in order to lure Ash to him. But I guess Ash is probably going to be the one to take his head in the end. After all, there can be only one.

This was great. ^-^ I hope that guy who is watching Misty isn't going to hurt her. But if he is, Ash will kin-ck his butt. Right? lol. YAY! I am glad you going to use my idea. I am touched. Thanks. Just keep on writing this story. Peace.

i have only read the frist chapter but this is already one of the best fanfics i read in a long time keep it going

Uh oh...I smell trouble ahead. I just hope Ash can face this guy and who's the new gal?

lachland's behind lachlan, huh?

This was a very interesting chapter. I am glad you are continuing this. I am looking foward for chapter 6. Oh yeah, the final battle should be on the roof of a abandoned building. Good suggestion, right? You don't need to use it if you don't want to.