This was a great story. I completely loved this story.

Yeah, sappy... but so freakin' cute. Aww the boys found love. I loved how they each met. Cat crashing into Mike, that was hilarious. And that poor doctor. LOL Glad Charity was smart enough to see Donny for what a great guy he is or I might've had to track her down and kick her into next month! You about broke my heart in the last chap, with Leo and Mike falling for the girls and leaving poor Don the odd turtle out.

Glad you made it more than a one-shot!

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary

you left me speachless

raph is the second oldest cause don has quite a few times called raph " big bro "

That was one of the best endings I have ever read.

Ok I'm crying.

Love it! absolutely love it!

Too damn cute for words. Loved the entire story. One of the best TMNT stories I've read. Wish it was longer though. Great work _

nice story

Hey great story really really love it a lot! IT's pretty awesome! i've missed reading TMNT stories and this is one of the best that i have read thus far.

I hope to read more TMNT from ya

I'm giggling...at 1:00 in the mourning, and my dad keeps coming in to tell me to shut up! This was so great! I mean, I'm just so happy that you didn't make it so sad! And when she was pregnant...I just couldn't believe it. But Hope turned out to be an okay kid, and I really wish there was a sequel or somthing. Just thinking about the gradeschool problems! The phone rings, 'Hello? Hopes gone all Ninjitsu on a poor boy again, can you come tranquilize her?' WHO! Once again, you've taken an idea and turned it into an artform! No, No! A Masterpiece!

This is Kixstana Boxin, Signin' Out!

Oh my gosh!

That was the best TMNT short fic I ever read! Your way of writing had me on the edge of almost bawling with the first chapter. I would definetly like to see some more indept shorts about the guys and gals lifes together_ Especially a funny one about maybe little hope getting into trouble at her Elementary school? That would be hysterical.

Thanks again for the great read!

Check ya later CAtz!

YES! A really good romance fic! You don't come across these all the time. YOU ROCK!

Oh I love this story so damn much! **sobs** OMG I love it! Ever since I was little I have always had a crush on Donny, (corny and stupid and lame, but hey, a five-year-old has a crush on everything once she discovers what marriage is) But when I saw the real-life movie I began to like Raph. Aw what the hell they're all so damn cute! o_o Email me when you have more of these types of stories! I LOVE THEM! (Oh and I like the story in third person better. First preson seems a bit hard to follow when she's describing her appearence.) Just some constructive critisism cuz the thingy at the bottom of this review page says to give advice. lol

This is a brilliant chapter,, please update soon

(goes on to read chap2)