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Charmedmaniac
2003-09-13
ch 17,
abuseReally good story please update soon!
Tzarista
2003-09-01
ch 17,
abusei love this story to bad it ended. write a sequel please
Ingrid
2003-08-24
ch 17, anon.
abuseI loved your story it was great
Barb6
2003-08-24
ch 17,
abuseI loved it! I'm just happy that Phoebe and Cole are together and that the sisters are together and happy. I hope you keep writing. I would love a sequel. What happens next? The sisters have to get a whitelighter. And someone has to teach them how to use their powers. I really enjoy your style of writing and I would love to read more.
Evil Angel
2003-08-24
ch 17, anon.
abuseVery good story!
I loved it from start to end!
I'm glad we get the happily ever after end... too bad grams died but I guess she will find a way to visit once in a while! lol

Anyway thank you - especially for all the wonderfull P/C scenes!
Emma
2003-08-24
ch 17, anon.
abuseI liked it! aw...I love Phoebe N Cole stories when they are in high school and whatnot! you should write another story...
Sweetone41185
2003-08-24
ch 17,
abuseYou are too ** yourself. I think the ending is very good, but then they always say that you are you own toughest critic. Anyway, anything that has Phoebe and Cole together in the end makes me happy. A sequel would be really nice it would be cool to see how they do on their own but no pressure or anything...The story was great I loved it the entire time.
Tzarista
2003-08-21
ch 16,
abusegreat chapter
post up more soon please
Ingrid
2003-08-16
ch 16, anon.
abuseI love your stroy so far contiue
Evil Angel
2003-08-16
ch 16, anon.
abuseThe scene of the cemetery was so beautifull! I almost found myself in tears! Really well done!
A.nat
2003-07-28
ch 15, anon.
abuseThis fiction rocks...im looking forword to read more

~nat
Barb6
2003-07-24
ch 15,
abuseThis was good - but now what happens to the sisters that they have fulfilled their destiny and destroyed the Source? Or is just the begining of the story? And what happens to Cole now? Please keep writing.
Tzarista
2003-07-24
ch 15,
abusepoor grams
post up more soon please
Ingrid
2003-07-22
ch 15, anon.
abuseContinue I love your stroy. WHAT WILL HAPPEN BETWEEN COLA AND PHOEBE?!
Barb6
2003-07-09
ch 14,
abuseVery good! I just hope Prue picks the right path! I have a bad feeling about this! I hope you have a new chapter to post soon!
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