XD Oh my god, that made my day... Poor Angelina! "I'm George." *gigle giggle*

in this story aws very much like fred and george would act. I think you would be great in a harry potter story or the sixth year at hogwarts.

I loved it! You got their characters down pat. Just loved the twists and the muggle marker. I would really love to enjoy the rest of the story.

So who's going to be George's wife when he gets married? You should really do a twist and make it DRACO MALFOY! Ha Ha just kidding. But truly good work.

I almost fell off my chair with the ending, that was so in character i loved it

*lol* that was hilarious! :)

That was a great way to spend five minutes. The twins have such nice interaction here - they're not codependent, but they're not disconnected either. In fact, I found them very believable.

I especially liked Angelina's use of ink and the ending. Thanks for the grin and the read,

Luminous Marble

That kicked ass, especially the ending. Fred and Angelina are so sweet. I love this. Great jitters, and whatever evil little bunny seeped in here for you to call Charlie that had me snorting with laughter. I was the subject of much ridicule from freshmen in my teaching assistant class thanks to you.

Wonderful.

I love it!

This is just perfect Fred and George material and I'd love to see Angie's face when he says it...

I especially liked the way you used their conversation to give little bits of their history. Thank you.

This was wonderful! What an original and fun story line. I enjoyed it immensely!

What a cute story! I loved the part about Fred leaning over and saying he's George.

This was so cute! I always love Fred/George banter, and this was a lot of fun. I especially loved the ending, where Fred threatened to whisper "I'm George" after the wedding. lol I really enjoyed this.

Wow! That was so cool. I can totally imagine Fred doing that to Angelina, and Angelina throwing a fit as they walk down the aisle. Wonderful!

Good job,

Leaf

Lovely! Very in character, can just imagine the twins and Angelina behaving that way, pretending to be each other and making pacts about double weddings. Loved the ending, really funny!

Great story. Are you going to continue it?

F&G are in character and I can imagine something like this to happen to Fred.

Oh, WONDERFUL! I loved everything about this story! You absolutely nailed Fred...so adorable, how he was nervous. And the pranks...LOL. Lovely job, I absolutely enjoyed every word.