Reviews for The Wall that Fell

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eucalyptus 2008-07-15 ch 9,	abuseVery cool story.
Ashley 2008-07-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI have to say I'm dissapointed. Like everyone else when I first started reading this story it became one of my favorites and I loved coming on to read it and wait for your updates. But now that it has been so long, I have lost interest as I am sure a lot of people have. The story was so good and had such possibility but the possibility is just gone now.. the story is no longer interesting to me. Not trying to bash the writer or anyone who reads it, but will so many people who tell you they love the story.. why tell everyone you are going to continue writing it but then make everyone wait almost what.. 3 years now for an update? G
kaito142 2008-06-25 ch 17,	abuseThis story is the best! Please Update soon!
GryffindorHyuuga 2008-06-24 ch 17,	abuseThis story is great! Took me forever to read, but it was worth EVERY chapter! I simply love it, there are no other words to say! Yeah there are: Thank you so very much for writing it. This is very enjoyable. =)
MusicalCharlatan 2008-06-18 ch 17,	abuseOH...my...God. Where to begin? Well, I guess, first off, that was some damn brilliant writing. There were a few bits--more often during Laimea's thoughts--that it was a bit repititive. But on the whole, magnificent work. You really drew me into the story, I must say. It's the first story I can recall in a long time that's managed to make me cry. The despair that she felt during the period where she wanted to fight and all the hell that happened thereafter, I, personally, really connected with. The shame and the absolute burning fury that she experienced when she was chastised by all the soldiers and Anya...let's just say, I've had the same stupid argument with my mother for years when I told her that I was considering the army and not just to be some nurse. And overall, your description of all the thoughts and emotions in this story has been spot on. I also congratulate you on being decidedly un-marysuiesh with a rather mary-sue prone character. Usually, stories that have a halfelf in them inevitably end up being ridiculously corny. But I was delightfully surprised by your story. The story line, to me, was quite believable and very enrapturing. I also appreciate that you didn't just focus on Legolas' and Laimea's thoughts. I confess I'm no good at this particular feat when it comes to writing, and I was really impressed by how you characterized Gimli and even Aragorn in much of this story. But I think the thing I was most enthralled with was how well you portrayed Legolas. I have to tell you, it is ridiculously difficult to find somebody who is capable of creating decent dialog and actions for Legolas. I don't think I'm even that good at that. But your Legolas was virtually flawless. Very believable. I mean, seriously, it's extremely hard to enjoy a story when you read something one of the characters says--esp. his royal highness--and you think to yourself, "Good grief, did he just use an american phrase?" shudder I thank you so much for allowing me to finally find a good Legolas/OC story. Lately, all I can find is tenth-walkers and slash. And god knows, neither of those really strike my fancy. There's just one thing that's bugging me about this story and it's that I still can't figure out Laimea's mortality situation. The girl's--what? like, fifty-two years old...something like that? So, at the least I can assume she's got prolonged life like Aragorn, but could she also maybe--just maybe be able to choose immortality. She's half-elven, right? Could she be like Elrond? Please, I must know!! My one fangirl weakness (well, maybe not my ONE) is that I can't stand the thought of the mortal dying next to the immortal. I'm agonizing here. Anyway, again, beautiful story, beautifully written, update soon or I shall be forced to hunt you down! ^^
PrincessSYS 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abuseVery Interesting!
'lef-Marcela' 2008-06-11 ch 17,	abusepleasse update!! i hope it doesn't take 2 more years!!
Shadowfax234 2008-06-02 ch 17,	abuseI LOVE IT! This chapter was so sweet- thank you for sticking with the story =)
smileyblu7 2008-05-21 ch 17,	abuseVery nice work! I LOVE the reconciliation between Legolas and Laimea because they were finally honest with each other. I think you have captured Legolas extremely well. His passion for Laimea and selflessness when concerned about her own feelings were very touching. I can't imagine that Anya's disapproval would keep them apart, but how can Laimea think that her foster mother will cause her more pain by insisting that she not be with Legolas? From what we've seen of Anya, she seems to be a fiercely loyal and loving "mother" to Laimea. So, I think Anya's reactions to Laimea's interest in Legolas are like those of a mother who insists that her daughter end a relationship if it is causing her unhappiness, but does not really know or has not seen how deeply he loves her daughter. That's just what I think... no matter what Anya will say or do, I'm glad that the threat of her coming home hopefully points towards some upcoming naughtiness between the two lovers! Great job of writing real and believable characters that we, readers, can care about and become involved with. I'll anxiously await your next update. Good luck!
anon 2008-05-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseThanks for putting up chapter 17!! Although I would still like to know what the phrase means, you did quite and impressive job keeping my attention this chapter! Haha. Well I can't wait to read the final installments, and happy writing!
jennfire 2008-05-11 ch 17,	abuse...update... interesting developement wink-wink laughs UPDATE!
vectis 2008-05-06 ch 11,	abuse"perhaps your ears have heard sounds that mind cannot?" Should that be mind or did you mean to type mine?
vectis 2008-05-05 ch 6,	abuse'He lied awhile in the dark' - this should be 'He lay awhile..'.
Luthien Ancalime87 2008-05-05 ch 17,	abuseYAY. WOW. OMG I R LURV IT!! lol. now im REALY looking forward to the next chapter lol. yaay mischief my favorite. through all the fanfics that have graced my eyes this one still remains my most favorite and it was the first one i read. keep the chapters coming. i shall be sad when it ends and thank you for writing such a briliant story. three cheers for lossefalme! hip hip hurray!! X 3 (man im lazy lol)
Eruanna Earenniel 2008-05-05 ch 17,	abuseThis story kicks **. You're VERY talented. Theres been like..a million times where Ive actually aloud been like NO or YES!-point being I love this. KEEP GOING! YAYAY

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