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Alexithimia
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseOkay, so that was one of the weirdest stories I have ever read. And I am left slightly confused...*squints an eye in thought and ** her head* But this was beautifully written, I fell in love somewhere around the first chapter. I really want to know what's going on exactly, and I guess I'll just have to visit your site to check it out.

Man I seriously had to hold back tears so I didn't spill on my laprop!

Anyway, great job!

Alexithimia
SammehIsTehSecks
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abuseWeird..OOC? Never. The fic was beautiful and raw, it showed how atleast I would feel if I loved someone so much and was afraid to ever say a thing and the day they left I tried in vain to convince them to stay and they didn't to have the hope that they'd mysteriously come back and just love me but to know that it wasn't true. To know that only in the fantasy world everything would always be okay. I loved it, makes me go back to a time in my life that was torment but I loved it.
Pavane
2006-04-15
ch 1,
abuseNo, it wasn't too OOC. A little, yeah, but fanfiction will (mostly...at least for Spike because his character's a bit hard to write in my opinion.) always be a little OOC anyway.

I liked it, even though I got a little confused in the beginning because of Faye switching back and forth between reality and her dreams. But I liked it. I might check out the end later.

One question, and I hope you will answer it for me -- why did you remove "Ain't Afraid To Die"? I really liked that story...you did a good job of all 28 chapters. :( I am sad. Any chance you'll repost it?
aln9876
2005-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's nice to read something like this every once in a while. Deeply rooted in fantasy, vague, dreamlike... It moved me, I must say. One of the most bittersweet and tragic interludes anyone could ever imagine (and that's just the way any post-series S/F fic should be), and pulled off in such a lyrical, wispy style. Wow.
Ahnkitomi
2005-06-10
ch 1,
abuseVery, vey bittersweet. (I read the version on the website, not this one) just a note-it's knelt, not kneeled.
Sargonne
2004-10-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was perhaps, the best Cowboy Bebop fan fiction I've ever read. You write how I DREAM of writing, I love your Spike, your Faith it's all so real. I could FEEL, everything in this fic like it was real. So well descripted. This one is definately going on my favorites.
MitoraAkamori
2004-10-15
ch 1,
abuseSo...she was dreaming? Is he really dead?Oh I dont know, my head hurts...But it was pretty sweet.

mitora.
DivineAngel143
2004-10-12
ch 1,
abuseI've just finished reading this story's full version on your website and I have to say I love this completely. It made me smile, it made me cry, and you had me wanting more. Sadly though, it's a one-shot; so I guess I'm going to have to bear with that. ;)

I absolutely loved this and I plan to read your other SpikexFaye story. This has been the first SxF fanfic I've read thus far, and I'm glad to have run into yours.

Good job for getting me obssessed ^__^.
Siluial
2004-06-27
ch 1,
abusedefinately stunning. mind-numbingly brilliant. this is definately going on my favorites list.
Rhianne
2003-08-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseAwesome! Of course. Your fics are always worth reading. Keep it up.
Michelle
2003-05-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was >sniff< beautiful! A little long, but really really good. I read the rest of it on your website and I just loved the ending. Where did you get those songs? Wow...
I think this story deserves WAY more reviews! Please please please keep up the really really great work! =P
Absentia
2003-05-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is by far one of my favorite CB fics, oneshot or not. Great depression read ;p. Do me a favor? Check out my pathetic lil story?? *shimpers* I need reeaaders... again, KICKASS WRITER YOU ARE! XD Keep it up. Love how you get everybody in character.
Kentai
2003-04-25
ch 1,
abuseWow...I'm drooling on my keyboard, that was some powerful stuff, it almost makes you feel like you're dreaming, and drunk with a headache, maybe I'm getting tired, I don't know but that was awesome.
Neko-chan4
2003-04-17
ch 1,
abuseThat was absolutely beautiful! I'm so close to bawling my eyes out right now, I just had to tell you that. That was the saddest, most profound, most romantic thing I ever read. It was so bizarre and ironic, but I just so happened to be listening to "Blue" as I read the end of the fic, and it made me cry even harder. She notices the blue sky in it; says it will be the bluest ever, just as the singer croons in the song. I really need to go cry it all out right now...

(I read the full thing on your site, btw, but came back here to review. I really hate FF.net for that ridiculous ban, right now. To think that such a beautiful piece could be banned over something so silly...)

Anyway, I hope to see more lemons (and non, I guess. But I really love lemons) from you in the future of these two. You are an absolutely amazing writer!
I Smite Thee
2003-04-15
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was deep. I almost started crying while reading this. Really, really good writing. I don't even like Faye very much but damn you made me feel sorry for her. Excellent job.
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