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Kendra 2008-04-10 ch 25, anon.	abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! I saw the movie when I was very young and David Bowie gave me nightmares (I think it was the pants :P) but I revisited the movie a few days ago with a few friends and I quickly became obsessed. I found Time to Choose on google and then I started reading this one and I absolutely adore it!! It sounds like it works so well with the original story and your writing style is fantastic. I think I know what Adair was going to tell Jareth and I want to find out if I was right so update SOON please!!
MISS POETIC 2007-11-02 ch 25, anon.	abuseO, SUCH TENSION AND STUFF. I THINK I KNOW WHAT KIND OF BIRD HEATHER IS, I'M ONLY GUESSING, I MAY BE WRONG: IS SHE A SPHINX? IF SHE IS, THAT WOULD BE COOL! ANYWAYS, KEEP POSTING NEW CHAPTERS PLEASE.
The Crystalia Sisters 2007-10-29 ch 25,	abuseWow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter! See ya! Lyn
gully88 2007-10-27 ch 25,	abuseyes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes you did it thank god!! i have been dying to read al this! please dont let us wait this long :( it get very tense and makes ur mind crazy lol again please update ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Fern
notwritten 2007-10-27 ch 24,	abuseOh right what a cool chapter this was. More to come I hope. :-)
lauren 2007-08-18 ch 23, anon.	abuseI haven't visited in a long time because this story hasn't been updated recently. Was Heather a Phoenix or something like a bird of passion? Oh I hope this is updated again soon
Lauren 2007-06-19 ch 23, anon.	abuseI've just found your story and I wonder-- could Heather be a Phoenix and that is why there were only ashes? I've recently gotten into FanFiction and I remembered that I love this movie-- and who didn't find David Bowie yummy? Sarah always came off a snotty b-witch, but then what teenage girl isn't at that age. Anyway, I'm falling into your spell and now I've come to the end of what you have written for the moment and I'm waiting breathlessly for your plot bunny to escape the hutch again. Thank you for a brilliant story, though I wonder with Adair if Jareth would come to love (like his Sarah) Dawn. Now an interesting side bar-- he always watched the dawn and dusk fall from his window, perhaps this is where you got the idea to name Sarah's daughter Dawn? And her soulmate Jake-- both J names Heehee
gully88 2007-03-29 ch 23,	abuseomg this is so sad! is this DRAMA? I cant believe heather died?? ehy did you do it?? well you betta make this story have a happy ending because im on the verge of tears here
gully88 2007-03-29 ch 11,	abusewow this is a fab piece of writing in this chapter! it was really emotional!
dreamlabyrinth 2007-02-07 ch 23,	abusesniff What a cliffhanger! Now, I can't believe you let Heather die and did not bring her back! I really do hope she managed to transform and got away. Poor girl. Don't let us wait too long for the next chapter! Oh, says that "it is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved". So: please, please tell me Heather is not dead.
Labyrinth obession... for n... 2006-08-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG! How dare you leave us at that point!! I am mad, but in a way, applaud for your use of great fiction. You really know how to make people angry when they're at a good part. Please udate soon, I suffer wait.
Brf526 2006-03-01 ch 21,	abuseGreat cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what happens. You need to update soon!
Midnight Lady 2006-02-05 ch 20, anon.	abuseah, the phoenix. reborn from its ashes, it represents a new beginning. or some such lark.
dreamlabyrinth 2006-02-05 ch 21,	abuseYou are evil!! EVIL, I tell you! And who is that woman? I really like the style of the story when it's Nicholas who acts. Very much down-to-earth and practical, but still loving and caring. Perfect for his character.
semievilnightowl 2006-02-04 ch 21,	abuseGasp OH THANK YOU GOD. I was DYING. great work! Mas, mas!

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