hey, really good poem, i liked it. but i was kinda confused as to why there were parenthesis on some of it. but otherwise, great poem!

by the way, do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. D

Wow! this was wonderfully written!

I like the poem.

Perhaps its because I know that I absolutely suck at writing them and your's is tons better than any of mine will ever be.

Oh, this is so lovely! I congratulate on your poetry writing skills, they're fabulous!