 Kayrana 2005-01-10 . chapter 3Hello! Kari is cool, I need to put up more fan fics, and I hope you update soon. |
 TheCakeThief 2003-04-23 . chapter 3another good chapter!! ^-^ |
 Miyukiko 2003-04-16 . chapter 2I lovies you fanfic!! ^_^ It's great! keep it up! I love writing Inuyasha fanfics too! but the thing ish.. I can't be bothered continuing them but I'm planning on typing up now! ^_^ well.. Ja! |
 Vehemently Yours 2003-04-16 . chapter 2You may want to be careful. I don't know if you noticed this but Kari is coming dangerously close to being classified as a Mary Sue. It's good so far though, just be careful with Kari. Well, I suppose if you wanted to you could make her a Mary Sue. Your fic after all. Hope you update soon. I'm interested in seeing where this story is going.
~Ja ne!
~*YoukaiTaiji-ya*~ |
 TheCakeThief 2003-04-16 . chapter 2*grin* Its good! Everyone is in PERFECT PERFECT character. Update soon. |
 Makito 2003-04-16 . chapter 1 WHOA! That was good. I like how you opened it.
What's really good is IY and everybody is in perfect character. You don't see that too often anymore. Keep writing, I want to find out who this girl is!
^:.Makito.:^ |