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fluffylover2005
2006-08-13 . chapter 10
Never, never, never, never give children choclate. It's just not smart.
fluffylover2005
2006-08-13 . chapter 6
I feel your pain. I have to tak ecare of little kids like that, too. The only diffence is that all the people are pretty dang hyper. Oh well. Love the story.
fluffylover2005
2006-08-13 . chapter 2
Correction to my last review: Pity the MAN.
fluffylover2005
2006-08-13 . chapter 1
OH NO! This is going to be Hell for Inuyasha and Miroku. Pity the men.
Cody
2006-05-23 . chapter 19
I think this story and the prequel were great! Personaly I like the ones involving kagome and an infant/toddler inuyasha, but this story was special. And I knew Jaken was gay!
ArcherGirl87
2005-06-24 . chapter 1
I can hear the evil music playing. God yer evil.
inuzrule
2005-06-17 . chapter 20
hehehe, you truely deserve some handshakes, pats on the back, and a cyber cookie! I shall reward you with a little story. Inu and the gang are in the modern era, by the way.

Inu has been fighting Koga, and gets sent to the principal's office. exiting the office is Miroku.
"hey, miroku! why did you get sent to the hellhole?"
"Girl's locker room. you should have heard the squealing. oh, the squealing!"

^_^(sweatdropping) yeah...i hope you like this little preview to my next chappie for The Screen Names! ja ne! YOUR STORIES ROCKS!
animekraze
2004-07-06 . chapter 16
0_0 o_0 EW! Jaken is a gay man! I feel like throwing up. *tries to hold throw up*
animekraze
2004-07-04 . chapter 18
so funny!! I loved the whole thing, just like your other one!
Super Buu
2003-09-21 . chapter 20
I would like to say this is the funniest and one of the most well thought out fics I have ever read. You really kept everyone in character, (except Kaded, but it was a funny OOC that was well thought out) and you obviously had this well thought out. I like Kagura being the exact opposite as a child, it's just so cute. You have a wondeful talent and I hope you keep up the good work.
Houseki
2003-08-23 . chapter 4
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! CHIBI SESSHOUMARU! HAHAHAHAHA! SUCKING HIS THUMB! HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Houseki
2003-08-23 . chapter 1
*has a giggle fit* MORE CHIBIS!! *another giggle fit* *sits straight up* I wonder if Sango's Hiraikotsu shrunk too. *Bursts into another giggle fit at the thought of a chibi Sango rushing into battle with a chibi Hiraikotsu*
evil older sister
2003-08-04 . chapter 19
that was another very funny story. You should write another sequel
Maiden of the Moon
2003-07-13 . chapter 19
::Gasp!:: NO! Not writers block! ::whimpers in fright::

Well anyway, Sugi-chan (may I call you that? ^_^;;), help is here! Being one of my fave authors, how could I not help you?

I'm assumming you're going to keep the original idea of fruit, and of Inu and Kag both turning chibi and running into Sessho-Maru sama and all the other ideas you had already had.

Here are my ideas to add to that wonderful mass:

For fluffy Inu/Kag moment- chibi Inu gives chibi Kag a flower! ^_^ You could make the flower broken and stuff like he accidently fell or something, that would be kawaii too! ^_^

Naraku kidnaps chibi Kagome and either Inu tries to save her himself (nasty flashbacks for Monkey boy, ne? XD) or he convinces Fluffy to do it for him. (Personally, I like the first idea better)

Kikyo comes back (NO~O!) and tries to talk little Inu to kill Kagome for her or something

Fluffy tries to drown Inu-Yasha out of anger or something, only to have Inu bouncing back, thrilled as ever (Sugoi! My brother tried to drown me! XD)

I'll give you more ideas, if you like- e-mail me at digidragon36@juno.com!

Gotta go now, moon gazing! XD
Dark Angel 13388
2003-05-02 . chapter 19
Oh my God, this whole thing was friggin hilarious. The thing about Jaken being gay was making me laugh out loud. Monkey boy has a nice **...lmao.
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