Hi, it's fantastic so far, and you really should be proud of yourself. I honestly can't wait until Chapter 3. It is called a cliffhanger :) If there's any way it could be improved at all, it's slow the pace down a bit, but its not essential. It's brilliant as it is. If you need any spelling checkers, I am willing to help but don't feel like it's an obligation. Keep writing,

Laura

Wow, Iris! You write brilliantly. You're better than me! I can't wait for chap. 3, please update soon! I love it I love it I love it! Anne

OK OK! I discovered it! UPDATE NOW!

Hey, this is a good start, very sweet! I look forward to reading more .

Thank you for saying I inspired you, I'm really flattered!

Takita

Hey Iris,

Love the story, as you already know. Can't wait for chapter 2! Is there anyway I might be allowed to read it before it's posted? Hint Hint. Well, G2G, more reading to do. Email you soon! Anne

Though I can never see Jin with Julia, this is unraveling quite nicely. The opening chapter is short, but it’s a good beginning. Can’t wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the following chapters. You’re doing great.

Aww, Jin misses Julia. It's such a sad thought to have one of your friends move to a different country. It's happened to me before, I can totally relate :-( I think you've done really well with this so far, keep going with it, I know it'll be really good.

By the way, thank you mentioning me as an inspiration. I'm actually very touched by that, I didn't think my writing would inspire anyone. Anyway, good luck with the story.

C-S

Well thanks for the reviews, if they come, they're not here yet. In the first authors note I said thoughts are between ** but they are CURSIVE. Just remember that...

Byebye

Iris