Really good story.

Would like to see this finished someday.

Ignore that blan review, i screwed it up, sorry ' anyway, your story ROCKS! I love the partnering so much i wrote my own p/mai...

update the sequel soon!

I was just reading this when I realized how funny this sentence sounded.

"He clutched the orb tightly, his hand barely large enough to cover the entirety of the golden surface."

Apparently, the eye is approximately the size of an orange..

Oww... no wonder Pegasas's empty socket hurt so much...

:)

Wow! I love this story. I'd love to see more! Finally! A Pegasus/Mai fan! ::does dance of joy:: I'm not the only one who thinks they'd make a good couple!

...what a place to end!
thank god you've written a sequel! Or at least started it...
what a storyline! Will Mai get with Pegs? Will he get over Cynthia?
WAH, i wanna know now!
...could you please write more?

what! you cant end it now it was good. write the next one before all us fans go loopy.I like what you have done with the eye but dose this mean it has a yami like the puzzle and the ring and the rod? you must let us know!

...Excuse me? Did you just write "End"? No. No way! How could it end here? ARRGGHH!*flopsandtwitches* You can't be serious. Isn't there more?

And how exactly you're supposed to conclude this within one chapter is beyond me. Unless this story isn't complete yet? *terrified look*

Cute. _. And quite amusing.

So howcome Ryou didn't feel this "call of the eye" when he was coming into the game shop?

Wha-? They have rooms now?

Kudos, Kabuki, you have accomplished what all the highly paid creative teams in Hollywood could never even dream of, you've created a sequel that's better than the original.

Yay! Kaiba's an arrogant jerk-ass! Too many people try to gather him sympathy my making him all sweet and gushy. Meh, he's not some poor, tortured little sould, sweetheart trapped under a hard shell, nope, he's just a jerk. *is set on fire by angry Kaiba fans*

Aw, poor Pegs. He just can't win.

Oh, there's that one part where Pegasus says that nobody's ever hit him before, but didn't Mai belt him in the face earlier on?

Well now, um, that was pretty sudden.

Chkah-chkah bw...

Pimpin' Pegs, no straight mortal woman could ever stand a chance against the allure of his taunting, school-boy charms.

Heh heh heh...

Mai and Pegasus alone in the stuffy elevator with the dim lighting, stripping their clothes...

*Cue funky porno music* Chkah-chkah bw chckah-chkah bw.

Heh, uh, sorry.

Mai's kinda pulling an after-school-special bit on Pegs there *Tell us how you fel. That's it, let it all out.* But it's nice to see someone sympathizing with him.

Hey, did that nose ever stop bleeding? He said he was prepared for everything, but he never mentioned kleenex.