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| Hidari 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseWonderful... beautiful... superb... sad and yet hopeful? Will you write what happens next? This is really very good. |
| deer hunter 2004-01-31 ch 1, | abusewonderful |
| archforge 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis actually very good, it's only a bit hard to follow because it jumps character's point of views. However it is a nice touch how you do it too. Until Then. |
| Rising Dragon 2003-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThere is no true way to desribe this fic. It was that wonderful. You've done a beautiful job with this one-shot. |
| Sycamore 2003-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful. The ending..was pure drama. Intimate, waffy and very emtional. There's always a goldmine on fanfiction.net, and this is one of them. |
| Sycamore 2003-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful. The ending..was pure drama. Intimate, waffy and very emtional. There's always a goldmine on fanfiction.net, and this is one of them. |
| goatherder 2003-04-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice piece. Your characterization and devolpment was well balanced and accurate in my opinion, and it wasn't too overdone in the romantic sense. The level of your writing is so damn high, fanfiction is lucky to have people like you. Good work as usual. |
| Jho 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI love it :) |
| Shinji-Ikari-2040 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abusehey...umm...i dont know exactly how to phrase this but...umm...well..*superglomps* YOU ARE MY HERO MAN! i really enjoyed this addition to your works in evangelion, i liked how u actully explored asukas birthday instead of shinjis, u prolly arent gonna extend on this but it would be awesome if you did. drop a line sumtime Blade~ |
| dennisud 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abuseDamn, Why did you wait so long?!?!?! This is by far one of the best one shot stories around this year. and setting it after TI it sure shows a probable future for our two wayward pilots. The maturity the two have shown bares out in their shared experiences can only be understood by each other. Well done and I hope "The Game" is updated much quicker next time. dennisud |
| Elbart 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abuseGood story, nice to see Asuka a little more open towards other people. I like the ending very much, fits the personalities of both: quiet, but meaningful. |
| J-Hubes 2003-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWell this was a pleasant surprise. I like the feel of this story. From your note at the end am I wrong to assume that the feelings came from personal experience? Even if they didn't, I can say that you nailed it, even if it's just to me. My birthday and Valentines Day are the two days that for some reason never fail to depress me. I understand that a person can go into a birthday feeling that it's just another day; heck I even usually volunteer to work just to keep busy. The fact that it's only 2 weeks till my birthday made the impact even more substantial. I guess I'm just looking for the day when I have that glorious 'great' birthday. Well, it's bound to happen eventually right? As for the story, as I stated the emotions are well placed. Aside from a few random grammar issues, there wasn't anything wrong. I really enjoyed this piece, and I always look forward to your works. Later! J_Hubes |
| Ikari Battousai 2003-04-16 ch 1, | abuseA good story, I like the first-person perspective and the internal conflicts. The dialoqgue is also quite good. |
| Silyen 2003-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat else can I say but excellent story! |
| Nigoki 2003-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWhat can I say...thank You for another great fic. It is beautiful :) Keep up the good work and I'll always enjoy reading your stories. Thx |