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| RoXoR 2005-01-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseMy, you're slow to update. The last update was over a year ago. Hurry up and update the fic. It's really looking good, except for the fact it's unfinished. |
| staticrhubarb 2004-07-17 ch 2, | abuseWow, poor Marty! I hope everything works out for him and Jennifer, maybe if Marlene finds Doc he will be able to sort the whole thing out? Please update soon! :D |
| Justin Macri 2004-05-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey good story i wish there was more |
| egastin77 2004-02-07 ch 2, | abuseI love it please continue. |
| Eye Of Apocalypse 2003-11-24 ch 2, | abuseI'm impressed, it's pretty good so far, you really must continue. I'm really interested in seeing how things turn out. |
| Susan 2003-09-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseThe last chapter was really good. I wonder what Marlene will do to get her parents back together. Please don't wait too long to put up chapter three. |
| Back2theChaos 2003-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! You finnally continued! great chapter! wonder what Marlene is going to do now! |
| jd burns 2003-08-09 ch 2, | abuseNo, it makes sense. I can see how Jennifer might overreact to this situation and Marty's confusion makes sense too. Wasn't expecting Jennifer to get into Needles' truck though! Nice one! |
| jd burns 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI think that "Time Watch" is an okay title...but if you genuinely think you need another one, I'll think about it in the back of my mind and let you know if I happen to think of one, even though titles aren't really my strong suit either. *g*' Great start! |
| Anakin McFly 2003-07-21 ch 2, | abuseYOU CONTINUED IT! =D YAY! ^_^ *stares* I've never kissed my brother on the lips before and I don't think I ever will... |
| Catcher-in-the-Rye 2003-07-21 ch 2, | abuseThis is pretty good so far, please continue! |
| Sophie Zho 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Write more!...You better...haha |
| Abe 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good so far, but continue it very soon, because I'm interested to see what happens next!! :) |
| Abe 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good so far, but continue it very soon, because I'm interested to see what happens next!! :) |
| goblz 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Keep going! |