I didn't think they were out of character at all. What a beautiful ficlet this is! Short, but it really gets you.

"Uns Vader," he whispered, "De is in Himmel. Heiliget is dien Naam. Dien Riek sall komen. Dien Will doch doon, up Welt as dat is in Himmel. Gäv uns dis Dag uns dagliks Brod. Un vergäv uns uns Schuld, as wi vergäven uns Schuldners. Un bring uns nich in Versuchung. Aber spaar uns van de Übel. Denn dien is dat Riek un de Kraft un de Herrlichkeit in Ewigkeit. Amen."

XD I'm sorry, but I literally squealed when I figured out he was saying the Lord's Prayer. Don't you just love romance languages?

^_^

okay, question. Is this before they found out they were brother and sister?cause If not, it dosent make a lot of sense. But it was good, though!

Peace. So integral, and so needed. Thank you for writing this fic.
It is beautiful. And Powerful, and so true to the fabric of all of us. God is the only way to find peace sometimes, and thank you for letting Kurt's faith shower on this entire piece.
Thank You Substantially,
~ Ara

aw...how sweet...i like this fic

That is the sweetest story I have ever read!

It was nice!

Excellent work! It was all in character too, so don't worry about that.

AW :D That's not out of character, thats really sweet!

Ok I love Kurt and I really haven't read the comics but I liked this fanfic a lot. I read a few of the others and I really didn't have any idea what was going on in them but this one made sense to me. I also think you played Kurt and Mary Anne (Rogue incase you didn't know) just fine.

Ah adopted brother and sister play nicely. One problem with the new movies Rogue was adopted by Mystique yet in the movie it's "Who the hell are you" and of course Night Crawler is Mystique's son.
Good story I have to say. I am not a real good reveiwer and I haven't had a lot of practice. But I am a big comic book faN so i know my deal. First of all it was real good you could feel the love between them and the chemistry and you really need that in a story so yippe! good job! heres a cookie! You explained it well too bonus ten points.
Now for the evil comments MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! don't worry there aren't that many. First of all you might wanna read over your story and make sure it makes sence. Second have an english teacher read over it and make corrections because there are some palces were you forgot commas or good have made the story better with punctuation.
You can tell by this story that you knew what u were talking about which is good take it from me it is not going to end well with reviews if you don't know what u r writing about.
Good job on Rouge's accent you did it well. And if you have read the new X-men2 comic book didn't Jean Gray and Storm find him at an old catholic church so there you go.
well if you have any questions or comments which might be good or bad(vulgar lanquage etc.) you can find me or email me at lasota_44@hotmail.com.
*Good Bye for now fella Mutant*

aw sweet

Aw! I wuved it! It was...sweet, and meaningful. And I really felt that you captured that quiet feeling you get when you're alone in a church. Beautiful.

This was nice. I like these family bonding fics.