why are you expecting flames? it was good! the song fits really well too! i liked it!
Shadow
If you don't believe that it was good, i really will flame you ;)

weird

the song totally rocks! your fic...not so hot...sorry

nice...

Do more like that. (pwease?) But dun kill Rath! No... *ahem* Uh... *blushes* What? Anywaysh... Good! -^^- *is not sure if I already submitted sumthin for this story.. oO*

I will not flame you.

Wow! I loved it! you really have a talent for making people laugh AND cry ((of course not at the same time)). I wish you would do more angsty stuff. I really enjoy it ^^

it wasn't that bad...actually it was pretty good! lol. I adore Rath so maybe I'm a bit biased. ^^U

heylo! Lady Dragonniane says she like the way this was written, very nice and angsty, well done. Lady Dragonnaine also wonders why she is talking in the third person. Oh, well...
Lady Dragonnaine wants more R/C angst/fluff! (L.D.'s "Here Without You" didn't come out as well as she hoped)
please? *pouts* please? She knows you wrote this a long time ago, but...more? please?
Lady Dragonnaine
tearsbehindthemask@hotmail.com

no!no! this is relly good! u really should try to put dark cesia in one of your fics that would be cool

hey cool story, i really wish there was more though :pouts: oh well. very well written, good use of song and i like how you did the chaaracters too. good job.

O!! I like that song!! And I like this fic!! I've already read all your fairy tale stories, so this one was left. Keep writing!

This was interesting. A good interesting though. Usually, in all the other suicide fics, he does end up dying, and finding relief. You made it so that 1 he didn;t die (i think?) 2 He couldn't find that peace when he 'died' or was about to. I liked it alot. I think u shoud go on that idea of redoing it and put black cesia in. But make it a diff fic. I like this one.

*is almost crying* I LOVED IT! you have me practically in tears! how can you hate this fic?! great job!

OMGdess! This fic is awesome! i loved it!

That was awsome! Beleive me that did not suck. Infact i think you should make it more than a one-shot!! ^^