Reviews for Another Normal Day

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Phoenix 2004-02-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseNow THIS is a story with a twist... keep it up, lots of us are probably wondering when your next chappie is due :)
OneAznDragon 2003-09-02 ch 5,	abuseTHis is getting good!
hunter23 2003-08-02 ch 5,	abuseYou are doing great so far. dont have any suggestions so keep up the good work!
Kung-Duru 2003-08-01 ch 5, anon.	abuseI do wish that you would stop ending it at such an open spot... It builds suspense and all but when I finish a chapter, I don't think all that anxiety was worth it and... They're too short... But bigger isn't necessarily better... I still think that you don't add enough popsickle to the popsickle stick... Like... Add a few twists and turns inbetween and before the word concludes another part of that chapter. Another part of the plot. Anyway, that's just me and who am I to give writing advice. Still loving it, Kung-Duru.
jennyjennai 2003-08-01 ch 5,	abuseThis is an intersting story and it's unusual in the fact that I truly don't know what to expect next. This is a good thing - not predictable at all. I don't have problems trying to determine who is speaking, maybe it's just me. Anyway, I like it and I hope the next chapter is as good as all the others I have read so far. Have a good time on your vacation. Be sure to relax and treat yourself well. Hope to see you back here rested and relaxed and ready to write!
Kung-Duru 2003-07-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseMaybe it's just me but... Sometimes I can't tell who's talking... I think it was a little... Rushed... I'd prefer a chapter nice and tidy rather than rushed. Oh well, it's all good. Also, the way everyone is being so blunt is... Unexpected... Especially with the whole Misato part. I don't think that plainly asking a kid to join the army is all that... Tactful. Also, it may just be me but I think that you need more... Meat on the backbone of the story. Oh well, that's just me, my opinions. Not like anyone ever pays attention to what I think. Still loving this story. See ya.
Nigoki 2003-07-27 ch 4,	abuseGott...I hate this katharina chracter. Am I the only one sane? ANYWAY! Nice idea...with Major Katsuragi working for NERV. Hope, that it will not be k/Shinji fic.
AsUkA-aNd-ShiNji-4EVAngelio... 2003-07-27 ch 4,	abuseWell, I ended up reviewing the wrong story at first but anyways it was a great chapter! I think that you're really showing great potential and the humor is holding up. Poor Shinji, can't decide who he wants to be with. LoLz Keep Updating!
frograss 2003-07-27 ch 4,	abuseThat last chapter was a bit weird. But it looks like something sinister is about to rear its ugly head.
D14852001neko 2003-07-27 ch 4,	abuseWell as a suggestion, you should use shorter 'silence' speaks to "..." and not "...", one can get confused with the scence changers... The flashback changers are good, they can confuse you... But you should use at the end of the flashbacks something different like * instead of ~, dont you think? Where someone talks in german, you should use something bigger instead of "--" you may try ">>-->", its easier to determinate... Now, on other matters... MAKE IT A SHINJI/KATHARINA STORY SINCE, THIS MAY BE A GOOD ACC! And Rokobungi is Gen* and he sucks, and how did he rememered...? Please Update ASAP, like you did now.
hunter23 2003-07-27 ch 4,	abuseWow lots of new problems openin up in this chapter. Whole thing with Nerv and all. You have done a wonderful job on this chapter. Hope you do a Shinji/Kat pairing but oh well guess we will find out soon. I hope shinji will be able to change things this time if this story goes where I think it will go. Cant wait till the next chapter. Also if we already know who is shinji mother then who is his father if Gendou was never married to Yui?
RuRsHeR 2003-07-22 ch 3,	abusewow... i like where this is going... i was kind of lost after the ending of the first installment of this fic series but i understand now. I love what you're doing with the whole shinji/kat/asuka thing (its bound to happen, at least i hope so) i'm eager to see where you go with it and what pairings will occur (maybe you killed her off in the first one for a reason: Asuka x Shinji?). And also, i like kat's character a lot. She reminds me of asuka without all the emotional weight, which im sure was the impression u attempted to make. The simple fact of there being a contender to the "demon" is very appealing. great fic. its simply amazing. thanx for writing it
hunter23 2003-07-21 ch 3,	abuseAnother great chapter. Also liked how you presented everyones character not much ooc. Hikari was very funny with how serious she was about class rep and about the play. Keep up the great work!
hunter23 2003-07-21 ch 2,	abuseThis fic is absolutely one of the best sequels ever! My heart stopped when you brought Kat back in. I definetly cant wait till your next few chapters
jennyjennai 2003-07-20 ch 3,	abusePretty good chapter - can't wait to "see" what happened during third impact. I actually enjoy reading this fic. The flow of the story is quite smooth and the story is very entertaining.

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