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| Neets 2007-11-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh, this is quite good! I really like everything about this story. Terrific job! |
| Bebop Valentine 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. I love the idea that it wasn't just Van who got his happy ending. Gala definatly deserves it! |
| Ebonie 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseGala and Tylendal, Healer Gallia and Bard Stefan. Oh magnificent! |
| sage-serenity 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseNice fic! ^_^ Not deviating from the actual series either, since Stefen never really did elaborate on friends he had when he was poor. I really like the part Gala played. A sweet excerpt. |
| SpiritsFlame 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abuseThats really cool! but, um, I thought humans can't remember their past lives? Oh well, the story still rocks! |
| Ethidda 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was really sweet. Yup, Gala definitely deserves a happy ending. ^^ But I wonder if she still remembers herself as a Companion... prolly does, if she says 'Lendel... Good story. ^^ Really enjoyed it. |
| wizard116 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abusethis is good. it might have been a little beter if u kept going but good job with what you did.a |
| Jessica 2004-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved your story. I have no words on how it made me feel. I was happy to read it and to know that 'Lendal would still, always have Gala. This is a truly happy story, and I hope others enjoy it as I have. |
| AtheneMiranda 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is sweet! It's believable too; it's something I think could really slot in the canon, and I very rarely say that. You also seem to have handled Stef well, which I know is difficult, though you didn't go too deep in here. One minor detail - Stef wasn't from Haven. He never knew where he was from, remember, and if it had've been Haven I think he would have known. |
| Deborah 2003-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're right, it wasn't subtle. But you know, I don't care. I really liked it -- it made me happy. I, too, am a sucker for happy endings. And 'Lendel's death definitey needed a happy ending. |
| knight-of-emerald 2003-04-19 ch 1, | abusehey! Loved it, loved it, loved it. ^_^ i love even more how you insinuated Gala into the story. kee it up! more chappies please! |
| Aristel 2003-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought this was really good. u have a nice writing style. it's always cool to read a story with an original idea and it's especially cool when the writer manages to make it sound pro level |
| Coral607 2003-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's a great "what if"! I enjoyed it. =) |
| trinati 2003-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. I can tell that there is an extra meaning to it, but I have to run off to class...hopefully I'll have time to come back and reread it and figure it out. |
| etcetera-cat 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, bless! :-D i like this very much, it does a good job of filling in Stef's life before he came to Bardic Collegia and I like the little bit at the end where they're both at the Collegia :-D The identifying of Stef's singing ability is also very sweet, well done! ~etcetera-cat |