you must update!! this story is wonderful!! completely amazing work!! UPDATE!



HawkAngel

dude, its been so long since i've been on and then i found your fic tonite and of the 7 chapters I've read, its ttly awesome. i can understand why its got 1988 reviews. this has got to be the most original story on . sessh is a slave and rin's the master. and, ya got him EATING? WTF!?! very cool. most fics with sessh start out with him laying on a forest floor wounded getting rescued by some made up bimbo. there's no blubbering, no angsty bs, no high school drama where everyone's friggin 16, and no mary sues. your writing is simple and to the point and it keeps the reader's attn. i wish you'd update seeing its been like 5 yrs since the last. i'd like to find out what happens to rin and sessh. thanks for this fic. tis very kewl.

I love this story !!So far it is great !!

Though it has been five years, this fic is still in my head.
It may never be finished but I can hope for a happy ending for all the characters.
I hope life is good for you right now.

When I first sow your summery, I thought “ O no. another fanfic that depicts Sesshomaru as some wimpy alternate ego that fan girls use in their stories gust to play out irritating scenarios that would have been fine except that they stopped trying to make Sesshomaru Sesshomaru and more to play around.” Which is fine but not for me. So I skipped your story without a second thought. But then ‘Mistress Llyn’ a fanfiction author, and my best friend told me how amazing it was. So after many hours and eye-drops later I’m pleased to say that your story gave me goose bumps of happiness! (^-^) It is a must read and I hope to see the next chapter soon.

When I first sow your summery, I thought “ O no. another fanfic that depicts Sesshomaru as some wimpy alternate ego that fan girls use in their stories gust to play out irritating scenarios that would have been fine except that they stopped trying to make Sesshomaru Sesshomaru and more to play around.” Which is fine but not for me. So I skipped your story without a second thought. But then ‘Mistress Llyn’ a fanfiction author, and my best friend told me how amazing it was. So after many hours and eye-drops later I’m pleased to say that your story gave me goose bumps of happiness! (^.^) It is a must read and I hope to see the next chapter soon.

Wow! I found out about this story on a community, and I thought it would be a pretty good read. But heck! This is some plot! You have perfect grammar and spelling, the length of the chapters are just right, and you maintain the world you created flawlessly! I really like how you made Sesshomaru acquire a sweet tooth. It kinda seems to fit him too... Anywho, I know I'm not nearly done yet, but do you think that you could update/finish soon? Then again, your last chapter could be the finishing one and I just don't know it yet. >_< My point stands. You are amazing. Can't wait to finish it!

Hey, just being nosy. Found this story through someone else and realized you had not updated in a while. Can I ask as to why?

This was an interesting story, I loved the plot and that Sess' experiences humbled him a bit (though they were really harsh).

P.S. I can't wait for the evil b*h Kikyo to be punished! She deserves whatever you have coming for her!

Can hardly wait for you next update!

write more please!

hi, i chanced upon your fic after so many years and your very first few chapters made me tear already...would you please continue this wonderful story? i know chances are rather slim considering that it has been 4 years since your last update but could you please try to finish it? thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story. :)

I love this story!

It shows both Rin & Sesshoumaru love each other deeply.

Thanks~ Author

would you like to start another story for Rin & Sesshoumaru?

well "Ras" the only reasin that I'm reading your FanFiction is because my bff said if I don't she will KILL me 'slow.' I have not read your story yet because I allways print my FanFictions befor I read them. However if this Fanfiction dus not have a 'happy ending' like all good storys do I WILL!- got it... But I have read alitel so far and it is amazingly good, don't make me rigret it!@

:D LOVED IT!!

I LOVED IT!