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Frozen Nitrogen 2008-07-23 . chapter 7
Well, look at ME, delving 4 years into the past. Of course, that probably means reviewing it is futile since it happened so long ago; still:

The fight scenes, especially in Ch6, were awesome. Vivid and lengthy descriptions, and you certainly didn't skimp on the gore or brutality! My favourite part was the description of Xion's pelt "shimmering with blood". That's a phrase I'm gonna steal, big-time. :D

But killing off Amy?! That's cold.

Proposal for improvement: Is it ever actually explained WHY Xion ever appears in the first place? 'Cos if so, it eluded me, and it's a mystery I feel needs resolution!
SuperSolus 2004-12-31 . chapter 7
Sehr gut. I enjoyed reading this.

It must really suck to be Sonic right now, but at least Shadow's enjoying himself. Haha.

Good story. Good ending, for at least a few characters. :)
Angelgirl03 2004-03-07 . chapter 4
Wow! This is good, and confusing. But really really good! Please keep writing! Don't you dare get writer's block I need to see how it ends! Who's that white hedgehog? Why is Shadow now Xian? Tell me Tell me!
Formerly Known As 2003-08-20 . chapter 3
Dialogue is a good thing, and that was pretty good dialogue really. But, it would be nice if you added who was saying what every once in a while. It got confusing for me after a while who was saying what.

I like the characters, Etheran particularly strikes a cord with me for some reason. But the story is a little vague and rushed. Take some time and flesh it out a little. Add some extra detail, don't rush the plot too horribly.

This story has a lot of potential, it's got great characters, an interesting plot, and pretty good dialogue. But just take your time. Rushing won't make the story any better.

But yeah, sounding good!
SuperSolus 2003-08-20 . chapter 3
Hehe! Very nice! The argument with Xion and Knuckles is... umm... agressive!

Etheran... hmm. Tough nut to crack, him. I wonder who he is.

Well, Keep up the good work! ^_~
Dusk the Wolf 2003-08-20 . chapter 3
Knuxie will have revenge. HE WILL! And so will I. Grr. Anyways, the dialogue's alright. Yeah, a little too much but it can't be as bad as my fics. I only have one real complaint, and that's the fact that you're mean to Knuxie. Anyways, bye-ness! *waves*
Nick the Raccoon 2003-06-24 . chapter 2
great story... I thank you for telling me about it! I'll e-mail you to tell you why I am twice as happy I saw this...
The-Wicked-Have-More-Fun 2003-04-30 . chapter 2
Cool! Very neat! P.s. Thanks for the review!
Max Evelyn 2003-04-29 . chapter 2
Interesting! story.

I like Xion, nice character.
Ringshadow 2003-04-19 . chapter 2
Normally I'm in a different game section, but lately I've been reading Sonic stories, and I really like this one. Please continue it :)
Shadenny 2003-04-19 . chapter 2
Really good. Is that all to it? Oh, sure you can copy the SG-1 crossover thing. I'm more occupied with my other fic.
Shadenny 2003-04-18 . chapter 1
It seems like a good fic but I can't tell without more chapters to enhance my opinion.
heath 999 2003-04-18 . chapter 1
Don't put yourself down! This is a good story! And I'm eagerly looking forward to more, so please update soon!
Koujo Wheeler 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
You got a good start so far- can't wait to see where you go with it.
Forgotten Muse 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Well, you've got me drawing Xion now. But I think the (shock, horror) coloured pencils were a big fat bad idea...
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