 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 32-sobs- I can't believe Zelda's dead! It's so sad! Somehow, though, this wouldn't have the same impact if she was still alive, as heartbreaking as it is. The fight at the end had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, and screaming at any member of my family that dared to enter my room and interupt me. ;)
I liked the Mystral/Link moment at the end. They were both so worried about each other, it made me very happy to see them reunited.
And, I must say, the last words Zelda ever said "Smile for me, Link" made that one of the greatest moments in fanfiction histoy. I'm serious. I could literally feel emotion pouring from my heart as she said that. It was also great because it showed that she was happy with her fate, and wanted Link to be, too.
So, overall story review: Oh my freaking goodness this is the best Zelda fanfic I've ever read! So well-written, plot twists, in-depth dynamic characters, epic fights, a romance plot, and a bittersweet end, this was, absolutely, completely, undeniably a perfect story. I love you for writing it! ;)
Take care and thanks for sharing this with the world.
-Allendra |
 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 29 Aw, man, I though for sure a kiss was coming! :( Very nice emotions played out in this chapter! |
 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 28Exciting fight! I'm glad it was Servion that killed Kisho, and not Link. |
 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 27Man! I've never been so happy to see Montero and Impa in my life! |
 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 26 All right! I love how Link is such an awesome figher. Very cool! |
 Allendra 2009-11-05 . chapter 24 poor Anju and Kafie. :( Go Link! Go Zelda! It's so fascinating how Link and Zelda are sort of switching places from how the started. Link was the violent, dark one and Zelda was the controlled, pure one. Now it's nearly opposite. |
 Allendra 2009-11-04 . chapter 21 Poor Zelda. I love the transformation Link is taking. Nice fight scenes, by the way. I don't think I've ever mentioned it but you write fights quite well. there's an art form to creating a good battle scene, in my opinion. :) |
 Allendra 2009-11-04 . chapter 19 Hm. A nit-picker. I have no idea how you spell that. :) I, on the other hand, don't think that it feels like you're putting too much into it. On the contrary, the twists of the plot are quite intruiging and keep the reader on their toes. Of course, you finished this a long time ago, but I still love to review for stories I really like! |
 Allendra 2009-11-04 . chapter 16 Wow, this is such a great story! Every time I think I know what will happen next, you surprise me! |
 Allendra 2009-11-03 . chapter 14 Ugh . . . I feel sick . . .Gross. But don't change the ending! Well, obviously, you didn't, but still I give my opinion! Poor Ganondort. I'm actually liking Montero up against Servion. Awesome parts with Link and Zelda. Really, truly, exciting. One of the best things I've read in a fanfiction! I happen to like Link's oath, though sometimes you just don't get many reviews for some reason on a certain chapter. Who knows?
Great job! |
 Allendra 2009-11-02 . chapter 12 Wow, quite a plot twist! Though I was sure Sheik was Zelda, there were times when you had me doubting! But having to kill her. goodness! This is so very intruiging! I love it! |
 Allendra 2009-11-02 . chapter 10 Wow, that was exciting! Nice job, a very well-done chapter. I'm really mad at Link for killing Jonah, though,even though I knew he would have probably killed him, too. Sheik's so cool. 8D |
 Allendra 2009-11-01 . chapter 8 Hey! I loved the Wind Waker! It's one of my favorite Zelda games!
Really, really good story, the last two chapters I'm not so sure about, though. Not to say that they weren't extremely well-written, but while searching for epic Zelda fics, I've found many that have done the same sort of thing.
But other than that this is so very original, so I'm sure I won't be dissapointed! |
 Allendra 2009-10-31 . chapter 2 Finally, the kind of Zelda fanfic I've been looking for! This is exciting! You write so very, very well! And I'm very glad you kept Zelda in-character. So many people seem to forget her indepedent, tomboy-ish nature and just have her be a sweet damsel-in-distress. It's refreshing to see the adventurous side of her come out.
So far this is very original. I really like it! |
 Hero of Time Freak 2009-10-26 . chapter 32I've been reading your story for the last year or more, and I can't help but say how amazed I was at the story. I just couldn't stop reading it! I really liked most of it, and my favorite part was the awesome battle between Link and Servion. I can't help but feel that this story was very, very good, and probably one of the best stories I've ever read, and I've read thousands. Thanks for writing it! |
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