this story is like the best yuffitine i read so far! you had me crying and laughing and going aw! your realli freakin good. kudos to you man. =]

Thanks for a truly wonderful and moving story. I enjoyed every bit of it.

Wonderful - absolutely gorgeous! I was recommended to this by a friend and long time fan and I honestly have to say thank you so much for captivating my interest with this absolutely beautiful story. I was up until 4am trying to finish this because it was literally that impossible to turn away from your fantastic prose and utterly enjoyable characterization. This story lived and breathed and totally drew me in in such a way that very few books have done for me in a while. Thank you for such an enjoyable experience. I'm definitely going to have to read more of your work. Be sure to let us all know when you're published - I will be sure to buy your books!

. . . I'm speachless. I just spent an hour of my life reading this fic in it's entirty and I'm convinced that it was one of the most well spent hours I'll ever have. This was nothing less than amazing. I was laughing and crying. And you gave us a happy ending! I'm a sucker for happy endings! I'll never look at Vincent/Yuffie fics the same again. This was a real story.

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That was honestly...the best story I've ever read
in my life
it was epc
at times i was litterely (and loudly) howling with laughter
and other ties i was on the verge of tears
It was truly amazing, how seemlessly you blended this story together, how you made a pairing like yuffie and Vicent mesh so amazingly, I'm awed
So now I'm going to fave bomb-you're amazing awesomeness
...
just wow

I was a bit intimidated by the length of this first chapter, but I'm definitely glad that I went on with this >.>
It was really funny, and half-persuaded me into liking Yuffentine... DX

"You want a heir so much, go have one yourself!" I screeched. "I'm sure as hell not going to go out and provide one for you!"

Tee-hee x3 That made me laugh. As did:

"Hey, Vincent," I'd go to Vincent.
"..."

"Hey, Vincent," I'd go to Rotting Vincent In A Coffin.
"..."

"Hey, Vincent," I'd go to thin air.
"..."

xDD!
Anyways, I'll read the next chapter, for sure. If not tonight, then soon xP Great job.

You should totally have more reviews than what you currently have. Everytime I read it, I hear Yuffie. To this day I still cry like a baby at the end. lol, Here I go again. I love you for writing this, lol

<3,
Rayne

P.S.- *gives many cookies*

Amazing story, I tear up every time I read this. Keep up the good work :)

Oh wow. This is...wow. I was utterly blown away by this story, and I was crying helplessly, especially for Chapter Three. This is just...amazing, and powerful, and I'm wordless.

You've done a brilliant job with this. Such a powerful story, and I'm so incoherant at the moment. I mean that completely. I keep trying for words and they fail.

Wonderful job. Wonderful story.

How have I never seen this before...? This wonderful fanfic has been around for seven years and I haven't read it up until now.
It's truly beautiful. No-- Beautiful comes nowhere near the right word to describe it.

But obviously you've succeeded in wracking emotion in every on of your readers. I can tell you I found myself crying and not wanting to cry and then crying more on at least four occasions. And promptly afterwards, I'd chuckle over a various exchange of text that for some reason felt so relieving.

The angst/humor ratio is absolutely perfect I'd say. So now it's time to peruse all of your other stories and add you to my favorite authors.

I love this. Like, I REALLY love this.
You've shown a new side to the lovely Vincent Valentine and Yuffie's 'voice' is amusing to read as it always is.
Once again, I brilliant piece of writing!

Ohmygod.
I wasn't even going to review this when reading the first few chapters, I didn't think you'd read. But now I AM reviewing, but this story as a whole.
This.. is amazing. It's unique and I've never read ANYTHING LIKE IT. I had to read through tears before squealing at something that made my heart soar, and I've truly never felt that way before. It's such a twist, Yuffie being given a deadline for death and Vincent looking after her..

It's also told brilliantly. Yuffie's little flashbacks, her relating what was happening to previous events..
I love this story and the plot so much. You're a brilliant writer, this fic just made me FEEL.

I don't care if it sounds pathetic or whatever for me to cry over fanfiction, this was just amazing. I wish the planet could read this, appreciate it like I have. I think my writing style might change a bit after this, actually. It's inspiring, and gawd damnit I will REVIEW to the end of these remaining 90+ characters if that's how much it takes to show how much I LOVED this fic.

The chapters were lengthy, and when I noticed the last chapter being "The Last Day" my mind flew to you writing Vincent watching her die, but I had to read MORE to see if that happened or not.
Even if you don't reply to this, I pray you see it, and realise how amazing, brilliant, awe-inspiring this is. I want to fave it over and over and over.

Here ends my review ^-^

Oh god.

Oh god.

God, and levaiathian, and every summon and partheon there ever was.

Th-that was. Kind of brilliant. It's been a long time since I've encountered a fic to actually make me bawl, but I was crying so hard on the mountaintop when I thought it was the end and then I was choking laughter when it was all okay again and and and

I only review fics that leave me speechless, ironically. Ye gods. Why can't you be paid for this masterpiece?

I... I wish I could give you some proper critique, but I can't. I couldn't find anything to critique. Your style... um. I should stop saying 'gods', lest they be mad at me, but just... wow. Seriously. I'mma gonna go recommend this fic to everyone I know now.

this stary is just...indescribable its that amazing! it was expirence to read! i love Yuffentine, and this has gotta be one of the best yuffentine fics ever written!

you are a very powerful author; this story had me crying in several places. you captured emotion in this story; it isnt just written. its there! you can feel it!

this is a fantastic story and i feel privlegded to have read it. you are a fantatic author!

Fluffiest fluff ending that ever fluffed. Ever. Great story telling, Guardian1.

The interaction between Yuffie and Vincent was remarkably well done; actually, the interaction and characterization of all the characters was well done, Cid and Godo especially.

The style of the fic deserves reverence. You described the scenes and actions of the characters in a manner that reflected the characters so well.

You also made the story fairly emotional. Yuffie's turmoil, Vincent's suffering, and their budding love was something fierce and passionate to read about, and I loved the way you portrayed it. Particularly the second-to-last chapter. I think the tragic love and sacrifice it entailed is what hooked me at the end.

It all looked so bleak and desolate; I think the helplessness of the entire situation is what nearly had me in tears. For months, Vincent lied and smiled to Yuffie to keep her hopeful--and he kept her alive because he was afraid to let her go. But then the revelation came about, the fact that there was no hope, no chance of redemption or happiness or love for either of them. And then it all just fell apart.

There were fervent and heartfelt goodbyes; there were tears and hugs and whispered "I love you"'s; and there was Yuffie telling Vincent to simply let her go, which was so terribly unselfish and heartbreaking that it really showed how far Yuffie had grown and matured from the entire ordeal.

One more thing: the overarching theme of being a traveler. I think that fit well with the story. Yuffie has always been the type of person to wander the world, but here you put her through emotional trials and forced her to travel as a person, and, in the end, that saw the changing of her character.

I've some concrit to offer, though I'm not sure if it'll be taken into consideration, considering that this story was completed nearly a gazillion years ago. But still.

I think the story's worst fault, the one that always jarred me throughout the reading, is its tendency to slip from past to present tense and then back again. That flaw simply stuck out to me, and it made the story rather annoying to read at some times.

There are also frequent mix ups of 'its' and 'it's' throughout the narrative. And, to add to this, I felt that Yuffie's voice in the beginning chapters (or really, her level of diction in general) was too proper for her. This was mostly rectified in the later chapters, but I felt it was still something noteworthy to point out.

But anyway, I'm sure these are things you've probably noticed but just haven't felt like changing. But still. Wouldn't be doing my part as a reading if I didn't make some mention of them.

So, fantastic story, and I'm glad that I finally took the time to sit down and read it. Favorited.

~Koky