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Amadoni
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseI'm glad that you wrote this piece. Excellent characterization of Sesshomaru-sama.
Demon Lover
2007-02-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was very good. But when I read the part with Sesshoumaru killing his son was nasty and sad. I could never kill my child like that. He was cold beyond colded. This story made me cry.
Fallen-Snow
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseThe most beautiful telling I've ever read of this unique relationship. Well done.
BakaBokken
2006-03-25
ch 1,
abuseEe, I really enjoyed this! I'm surprised I hadn't come across it before, but I'm immensely glad that I did. :D I ADORE your rendition of an older Sesshoumaru! Though you think this is a strange concept, I think you did a marvelous job with it. 'Twas a very nice character piece, and thank you for sharing it with us (even though I came across it a few years late... XD).
Midnight Unicorn
2005-10-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is fantastic. It's also likely the longest single chapter I've found. I commend your subtle manipulation of Sesshoumaru, slightly OOC, but plausibly so. I only want to point out the Jaken is a kappa, not a toad. It's a common mistake, but I thought I'd tell you. keep writing!
-The Night Mare
P.S. this is now on my gavorites list.
Tetsuni
2005-07-16
ch 1,
abuseAww...It's wonderful!Really great story!
kawaii cherry
2005-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseCool. Loved it.
hotcocoalatte
2005-03-22
ch 1,
abuseAmazing! Beautiful! However, those words don't do justice to your stories! Where do you come up with these ideas? The flashbacks were so sad and wonderful. I can't believe how you managed to chage Sesshouamru but yet keep him the same. Keep writing!
GoldenRat
2004-10-29
ch 1,
abusethis fic is so beautiful. poetic really.
Yamisui
2004-10-10
ch 1,
abuseyay! a thoroughly ORIGINAL portrayal of sesshoumaru in the future that DIDN'T involve a mary-sue or him being a rock star or something. (though i'd PAY to see him gyrating around a stage wearing tight leather pants...*drools) anyway, hats off to an interesting cast of original characters that don't make me long for canon. I like your brief flashbacks to the conversations between Sesshoumaru and Rin. ‘Rin thought Sesshoumaru-sama would like these flowers. They’re white and pretty, like Sesshoumaru-sama!’
‘Why do they shrink like that, Sesshoumaru-sama?’
‘Did Rin kill them, Sesshoumaru-sama?’
No. No, you would never do that.
i liked that one the best. p.s. want to join my yahoo group? it's called InuYashaStories and i've dedicated it to postings of fics that fit well into the takahashian world like yours. we need more stories, and i can guarantee you'll get feedback.
Silver Queen
2004-10-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is great!

You were right though when you mentioned that it's a little drawn out... some places seem repetitive, though I don't suppose you can remove anything with out destroying the overall flow.

Its nice though, I always like stories that take place in the time in between the fedual era and 'now'.
Rioni26
2004-02-21
ch 1,
abusewah...poor sess. so sad! but it was realli sweet, all those flashbacks. i almost cried! ^^; u should have at least fifty reviews for this!
Kashene
2004-02-18
ch 1,
abuse*tears* that was a beautiful story *sniff* damn you got me crying it was so good! You are a very good writer and this was very well written especially to have been written in four days. *grabs a tissu* keep up the good work.
Haruyuki
2004-02-06
ch 1,
abuseOne of the best Sesshomaru one-shots I've seen...loved how you made him finally recognize his humanity. The flashbacks, in particlar, almost made me cry. In short, it was great.
SP777
2003-10-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow! Wow! W-o-o-o-w! Now THAT was a story that had me looking forward to see how it ended.

Never had a story had me this engaged in a LONG time, I even found myself chanting 'KICK his **...'KICK his **!' when Sesshoumaru confronted that sorry 'son' of his.

But what I liked is the fact a writer actually addressed Sesshoumaru actually admitting the end of an era and having to adjust to the changes.

What I would like to see is him building a different type of 'empire' & 'title' for himself in the future.

I'm just surprised this story didn't get more reviews than this, I guess folks just missed this.
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