 Kelly of the midnight dawn 9/25/11 . chapter 1I know it's been quite a while but I was wondering if you could perhaps write a sequel to this story where Billy finally works up the confidence to ask Trini out on a date. And maybe Rita ruins it or something...
I'm sorry but I loved this story so much and even though it took me three hours to read I never got bored with it like I sometimes get bored with really long fanfics. I mean, I've never actually read a one chapter seventeen thousand word story in on night before. I just loved it so much, you painted such a vivd picture and had such a wonderful message at the end about trust.
And there are so few Billy/Trini stories out there... It breaks my heart because this was the first pairing I ever believed in (I was nine) and it broke my heart when Trini left and most of the Billy/Trini stories are depressing and sad. This story, even though it wasn't really an overtly Billy/Trini story, had wonderful hits at the pairing that made me just fall in love with it.
And the way you showed the friendship between all of them... you've made my day, my week, my month and perhaps even my year (Why did I just paraphrase the themesong from Friends... Oddly appropriate...)
Anyway, I love your writing style and the reason I'm being so direct in asking for a sequel to this is that I've been trying for some time to write a Billy/Trini story of my own and none of my ideas ever seem to take.
Great fic!
I loved it!
Kelly |
 Bubbles 1/31/11 . chapter 1 You captured billys smart talk perfectly |
 The Violent Tomboy 7/30/10 . chapter 1Awe...so sweet... |
 Caiaphas 6/16/10 . chapter 1Best ranger fic ever, even better the second time! well done! |
 blueyblonde 6/11/10 . chapter 1i love it |
 Ghostwriter 12/2/09 . chapter 1I love it. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 welleg 7/5/07 . chapter 1I loved it! |
 M.L. Shards 4/2/07 . chapter 1Aw...that was really good |
 historian 8/21/06 . chapter 1I've read this fic before, and it's still the best "original Ranger frienship" fic I've ever read. You didn't need monsters, morphers, or any major new characters. You did a Ranger fic without using any actual Rangering, and it's great. I admire how you took characters of a show notorious for lack of depth and brought them alive.
I don't if you still write Ranger (or any) fic, but you already accomplished much.
Historian |
 TsubasaCaligrapher 7/23/06 . chapter 1Oh my god ! I can't believe I forgot to review ! This is such a good story ! Loves it, another masterpiece ! |
 Star wars makeover 5/2/06 . chapter 1aw, that was really sweet! |
 Destiny45 11/19/05 . chapter 1Good story! I liked how perfectly you captured Billy's language. And the funny part is he really did go through a makeover during his time on the show! |
 The Black Dementress 4/4/04 . chapter 1'EY! New reviewer! Aw! Cool story! I love it! Billy has been one of my fave rangers and finally I found a good story about him! Tnx! |
 Feline Feral 1/16/04 . chapter 1Way to go. This story is really good. |
 Selenity Longsword 9/9/02 . chapter 1oh kiss her, this is one of the best things I've ever seen to describe why billy went from adorable nerd to majorly hunky guy over night, and Frankly I prefer billy over all but Tommy :grin: |