Oh, I hate unfinished stories, esp when they're so well-written! damn...

Bummer, I was really enjoying your story. I really liked the dream sequence part of your story, really, any of the ss/hg interactions were nice. Oh, well, perhaps you'll return someday and finish your story.

Um... Well first off I love the story so far it's great but you do know Blaise Zabini is a guy right? If so then Wow I feel like such a fool for pointing this out...

Honestly, I really really like this but I've noticed that you give more explanation of things and more descriptions than necessary. I've found my self skipping over paragraphs to get to dialog and more relevant plot. A little bit more dialog would not go a-miss either. Also, this is an HGSS romance story? Aside from the one scene in the dream and the very sparse thoughts from Snape and Hermione I would not have guessed it fell into that category. And lastly, aside from the dream theme I'm not seeing how your summary related to this story at all.
So, in conclusion, this story would be one of the greatest with a bit more Severus/Hermione interacton, more dialog between them, and less needless descriptions of the goings-ons.

Eh aren't you going to continue writing the story? =P

I LOVE ITT xD

where is the tbc?

next

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great story! please update?

Is this completely abandoned? You should pick it up again if you have the time, it's really funny and a great plot. I wouldn't worry about fannon or cannon or any of the unnecessary things, AU stories are just as much fun to read.

this is a really good story and i really ant you to update even though you havnt in years!! update soon please!!

just reading through.. Had to comment on the second Dream. I think you really outdid yourself writing it. Great stuff!

i fully support you on your age choice. i have no idea as to where this is going but i can't wait to find out.

I adore "Dream"! I love the insight into the characters' psyches, and your writing style and plot indicate that you're quite intelligent! Have you posted any other chapters anywhere? Thank you for sharing your talents!