you should update this!

i like it. ^ ^ tis is interesting! update soon?

Wow, I absolutely loved the first chapter. It was so good that where it ended, I'd was quite satisfied. And now to see a 2nd chapter, that's all too great. ^^ I am a huge fan of BradRan. And I hope there's more chances for them to get together. ^.~

Schuldich was very yummy in here I thought ; that opening scene with him getting Crawford to take him out to lunch was wonderful to read. The use of disturbing visions was ... disturbing (^^;) and reminded me of your warnings in the foreword. This was a very enjoyable read.

I agreed with MiniMorr-san, Misura-san.. please make this Crawford/Aya *puppy eyes* I've seen too many Brad/Schu and Ran/Ken .. I loved the story...

continue. i like the way the story goes. you think you can make it a bradxscu? :) ja.

Rare pairing alert! I love BradxAya - but it's so rare... I really want to know where this is going!

CxA please I want more!!XD!!

Please do a Crawford/Ran one? :) There aren't enough of those around...

A very interesting read, (hm, helps me to relieve my essay-writing stress, ahem). Since you wrote 'end?' at the end, I feel fully allowed to indulge in fantasizing about what might happen when they *do* meet again. Funny, the option that Crawford shoot s Aya does not really cross my mind. ^-^. Good luck with your exams!

This is really well done. There ought to be more Brad fics out there... This was rather a find, amongst the myriads of Weiss fics out there. Anyhow, your writing style is interesting. I like it. Your descriptions draw the reader in... >.> not to mention the prospect of Crawford in a trenchcoat. M... Okay, my fangirlism aside, now... I truly think you did a wonderful job. I won't bother you to continue this fic. But I do hope you'll write more Weiss fics in general, in the future. I think the characters and your style...just sort of meld together. It's massively cool. Anyhow. I'll shut up now.

You've got a good story here. It has a lot of good points that I like, and admire. I hope you decide to continue with this fic, and I hope to read more soon!

O… I like your description of the settings in the first few paragraphs. They’re very detailed, and yet, not too detailed, to the point that it’s too much. Just the right balance.

And I like how you incorporated a little German in the fic too. I think I learned a couple new words.

Back to your physical description, I just want to say I have a very detailed image in my mind, and it has just the right style to it.

Oh my gosh! THANK you! No one ever mentions the silencer with guns. NO one! Is it just me, or do they think silencers come with the gun?!

O… and over all, I like how you put little to no dialogue in the fic. All the fics out there… ALL dialogue. It drives me crazy.

Your writing is very smooth. It all flows from one topic to the other. It’s easy to read.

And you managed to put a tiny bit of humor in where Crawford thinks about his assassin training. That’s good.

YAY! I love Aya! Ok… I love team leaders in general. But I simply LOVE his entrance. Just as Brad thought it was all over, here comes some more! HA!! Love that. But NO…. He has a gun! What happened to the katana?!

O… I love this ! The two team leaders are talking! Hahahaha!

General comments:

Ok. For your information, lots of people read it. Like me. So… don’t go assuming. But… if it’s your examination doing the dirty work, I’ll just leave that be.

Really good story. (I’m going to say it anyways, because this is what everyone does.) Please write on! But… I have a suggestion. They meet again on a job… this time, Aya is better at what he does, and Crawford almost doesn’t recognize him on account of their last meeting. And… as you said, Crawford isn’t as nice as he was, and they kind of start a fight. The ending is so unpredictable… I’m not even going to give any suggestions.

You don’t have to use my suggestion… it doesn’t matter. And as you said, it’s your choice. But… hope you do!! ^_~

Hm well its really a BradxAya fic yet ^^' as the two just met and all but I do like what you've done with it so far. I hope you can continue this fic sometime soon, as there really arn't that many good BradxAya fics out there.

Wow. I liked this. I liked this a *lot*. Not only was it really well written, but the descriptions and dialouge were great. Also very in character. Brad was awesome...I'm going to draw him in a hat and trenchcoat like that.
I enjoyed this very much. As requested, I won't pester you to continue it; I think I'll favorite this instead and read it whenever I need something good and intellectual to read. Amidst the rapid flow of vapid Weiss one-shot fanfics, this was truly refreshing.