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lianeviolet 5/22/03 . chapter 1
I really LOVED this! Wow...panting...can't breathe...the great descriptions of the fervent attraction that Sara feels is just terrific. I feel like I was inside her body, going through the same emotions. I've added this to my Favorite Stories list!
Caspian Raider 5/13/03 . chapter 1
Very good. I love! Update, please! More! MORE!
Crazyangel1 4/20/03 . chapter 1
C'mon! They didn't really go to get coffee. . .

I wouldn't give a *damn* about coffee.

Anyhow, i really liked this. Although you kinda lit up my flame and left me a little dizzy like Sara. But that's good!

I loved it and thanks to you whenever i see them staring at somehting in the scope again i'll think 'Well?When are they going to jump each other?'

Angel.
wyldheart 4/19/03 . chapter 1
Wow... that was fantastic.

Is there a sequel in the future, maybe? (Hint, hint)
Iara 4/19/03 . chapter 1
That was adorable. I loved it.
Melindotty 4/19/03 . chapter 1
cute! her mind works like mine! we need to get away from the gutter
Peggie 4/19/03 . chapter 1
Wow! Hot! Good! More!
LSI 4/19/03 . chapter 1
Again, Anansay, love your style. Almost poetic. I don't normally like stories written in the first person, but you've got Sara so bang on that I really enjoyed this one. Oh, it reminded me of the long PSV in YGM, especially: 'His eyes searched my face, tracing it visually.'

Thanks for another great story!
gitedl 4/19/03 . chapter 1
Ohh boy, that was fantastic. Very intens.
kestinstewart 4/19/03 . chapter 1
oohh...so good...so very very good.

I loved you detailed descriptiongs, I find them quite hard to do myself. Would love to see a sequal to this baby!
midnightcaller 4/18/03 . chapter 1
"Intensity" is right, wow! Got a cigarette? *G* I could actually ... FEEL the intimacy in this story, it was wonderfully crafted. A sequel, perhaps? Please? :)
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