 lianeviolet 5/22/03 . chapter 1I really LOVED this! Wow...panting...can't breathe...the great descriptions of the fervent attraction that Sara feels is just terrific. I feel like I was inside her body, going through the same emotions. I've added this to my Favorite Stories list! |
 Caspian Raider 5/13/03 . chapter 1 Very good. I love! Update, please! More! MORE! |
 Crazyangel1 4/20/03 . chapter 1C'mon! They didn't really go to get coffee. . .
I wouldn't give a *damn* about coffee.
Anyhow, i really liked this. Although you kinda lit up my flame and left me a little dizzy like Sara. But that's good!
I loved it and thanks to you whenever i see them staring at somehting in the scope again i'll think 'Well?When are they going to jump each other?'
Angel. |
 wyldheart 4/19/03 . chapter 1Wow... that was fantastic.
Is there a sequel in the future, maybe? (Hint, hint) |
 Iara 4/19/03 . chapter 1That was adorable. I loved it. |
 Melindotty 4/19/03 . chapter 1cute! her mind works like mine! we need to get away from the gutter |
 Peggie 4/19/03 . chapter 1 Wow! Hot! Good! More! |
 LSI 4/19/03 . chapter 1 Again, Anansay, love your style. Almost poetic. I don't normally like stories written in the first person, but you've got Sara so bang on that I really enjoyed this one. Oh, it reminded me of the long PSV in YGM, especially: 'His eyes searched my face, tracing it visually.'
Thanks for another great story! |
 gitedl 4/19/03 . chapter 1 Ohh boy, that was fantastic. Very intens. |
 kestinstewart 4/19/03 . chapter 1oohh...so good...so very very good.
I loved you detailed descriptiongs, I find them quite hard to do myself. Would love to see a sequal to this baby! |
 midnightcaller 4/18/03 . chapter 1 "Intensity" is right, wow! Got a cigarette? *G* I could actually ... FEEL the intimacy in this story, it was wonderfully crafted. A sequel, perhaps? Please? :) |