I was a bad reader. I read and forgot to review. -hangs head in shame- It's such a tragic story. You set it up so well, making the characters so believable and lovable. Then, you knock it all down like a house of cards. I was just staring at the screen afterwards. So very sad. A job well done!

Aww . . . that's very sad, but very well written. Good job. (9)

Oh my... This is so sad! ;_;
More namek fics! ^0^

That was difficult to read, I mean that as in it was sad. Very well-done. Angst, when done right, can be very powerful. You did it right.

Really sad... *sniffle* You captured emotion well but the *this is going on* kind of writing just isn't me...

Bravo, Velli-chan, you grasped at a real emotion there. The poor poor little Namek, it was heart wrenching... and oh-so-real. Excellent work on this one, you made the nameks seem more than just a bunch of bums on a planet. Nameks truly are amazing. By the way, I love the names you picked out for them, so original!

Good work! I hope to see more! Ja ne!

*glares at the murderer* I hate selfish bastards that would destroy a perfectly peaceful world in the atempt to preserve one's vanity. As much as I love the Namekusei culture, and respect the Kura no Onna. The warriors should have never lost their touch. Peace is only viable if all sides argree, and Furiza *growls* was anything but.

I'm sorry if I'm rambling. Yet another masterpiece of your work Jen. You know I feel for this race, they are my absolute favourites.
*face saddened* It makes me heartbroken and sad at the same time to know that Discord never really got to know his people. He never knew what he was until Kage and Lute told him, remember?

I hope you get more inspiration for your stories, Fanfiction.net is too quiet with out you.

*hugs and snuggles*

Discord: *nods in agreement, cuddling Vel*

It's definitely a tragedy, all right. I've got a soft spot for Nameks, especially the little ones - I practically started bawling when Frieza killed Dende - and this one hits home. As sad as it is, I love it. Hope you write more soon.

Nice fic, Vel! I really liked the way the story ended... sets you up and knocks you down! ;-;

And the world as seen through the innocent eyes of the child is well portrayed! The child speaks the way a child would, etc. etc. I love nice little touches like that in fanfics.

Gods damn it Vel... Why the hell... I can't stop crying now, thank you very much! That was so beautiful at first, then you went and... damn it!

Don't get me wrong, you did a great job writing it, but that is so sad...

I'll leave you a better review when I can type without crying.

-Renee

Aw, gosh how sad! Poor kid, having to see that so young. Awesome fic, totally wrenches the emotion right oughtta ya. Love it!

YLG,
DS