update please I know that it was 6 years ago that you made this fic but I want to know what ll happen
well see you soon ... or I hope so jej
bye

I like it please update it soon!

WAH! Fantastic! The ONLY good Orphen fic I've read. Period. I know it's been quite sometime, but is there ever going to be a continuation of this? Or is it a oneshot/lead?

Aren't many Orphen/Cleao fics out there! Go you! Thanks! This is my favorite couple in the whole wide world! :P

KEEP GOING! =P

This isn't a review, but a request: I'm obsessed with reading a good Orphen/Serena fic (SSO and SM) and then a Jareth/NeoQueenSerenity fic (LABYRINTH/SM) You'll be my hero if you write any of those, specially the first! Please?

Oi, Cel. You need to update. There aren't enough OrphenxCleao fics out there!

Oh, and yes, happster360, I AM everywhere! Mwahahahahahah *cough cough* Ok, maybe not, but I like to think so. ^^

it's been a while. update!

oh i adore it... i need another chapy pleas!

hehe. that was funny. i could so see cleao being that way. update!

Um... hi... it's been a year and all that and u've probably forgotten abt this fic.. but could u pls update it? I'm dying to know what happens next!

i like this story so far, but u have to update it soon.

i know u probably started this story a while ago but could u write more chapters because i like the story so far.
can u e-mail me if you'll do it

Great story wish you would update. is it me or is alyson metallium everwhere?

geeze, and just when I was getting into it, too... hope this fic isn't abandoned, it's great!