That would be so scary! Stupendous job depicting Steve's emotions!

Good story. Thanks, Beth Palladino

This is a great story, keep up the good work!

I loved it! Real suspense, I was really worried for Mark._

This is one of my all-time fave DM stories! Keep writing!

A very good story, I loved it esp the Jesse parts!

Again BRAVO, BRAVO. Please continue to write stories like these.

Cool story!

Another good story, please keep writing stories like this. A