i really love your writing style, very emotional but real. write more.

Aw... this is a really good story! A very cute and touching story of Cloud and Aeris. Very, very descriptive and very well written! You're a very talented writer so keep on writing!

:wub I was expecting a more romantic feel, but I loved this anyway. It's a great idea for a fic and the fic had great writing. :)

Oh my gosh... This story made me want to cry my eyes out, but of course I wouldn't do that because I'm at school while reading this, lol. I must say this is one of the best... CloudXAeris fanfics I've read in a long time. When you wrote how they touched.. my heart jumped. I felt really moved by this story, it's a wnodeful piece. Be proud of that.

You write Aerith so *well*... and the relationship with Cloud is lovely, tender and warm without ever lapsing into melodrama or sap. I love the way you write her state of mind at this point in the game, acknowledging the danger but sure she'll succeed, and you write possibly the best Cloud I've ever read - I love his awareness of, and confusion about, his feelings. The dialogue's excellent, and absolutely in-character for both of them. I adore the sweetness and sense of hope at the end.

*sniff*

WHY DID AERIS HAVE TO DIE? *cries*

But that has nothing to do w/ this fic. I loved it. You don't find a lot of good Cloud\Aeris fics that don't involve Aeris not dying or coming back from the dead or such. This did neither, which was one reason I liked it. And Aeris and Cloud were both kept in character, which was another good thing.

Yes, a light Cloud and Aeris romance, but still, the fic was well-written. It was interesting and not to mention unique from others that I have come across. I believe that you put much detail into it, and that's what made the story one of the best that I have read. I really enjoyed this fic, and I hope to read others like this one here.

WOW! Man, I'm really impressed by the way you write Cloud/Aeris! ^^ Beautiful flowing style, and even though it's a short piece, it really reflects a depth that you can't even find in a lot of multi-chaptered stories! I think what makes this story sad is that we know that Aeris dies right after...kinda like that point in the movie where you KNOW what's going to happen, but the characters are clueless...-_-; Anyways, PLEASE write more Cloud/Aeris...it's such a cute coupling that's rarely done any justice (though there are definitely exceptions...and your fic is one of those exceptions!^^) Keep up the awesome writing!^^ *waves little flags* Ganbatte, ne?

Ja ne!^^

~Jurei-chan^6

Wow, that was beautiful. So well-written... you're an amazing writer. This fic is so sad, very moving. I love how you wrote Cloud and Aeris. The descriptions are great. It felt very real. I hope that you write more Cloud/Aeris stuff. You're really great at it. I love this fic a lot & I'm definitely gonna read this again MANY times. Keep it up!

Wonderful, wonderful fic... I love it! ^-^ You did a great job at the words and capturing their peronalities. It would be great if you did another CxA fic. ^-^

Oh... that's a beautiful fic. ^^ You captured Aeris's and Cloud's personalities perfectly. It was very sad and touching, too.

You are my new best friend! I don't like most Aerith/Cloud schtuff because..well...most of it sucks (which is not to say that most other stuff doesn't), but yours is goody great!

Lovely fic :) Very well written. I'd venture to say you could continue it if you wanted to :)

Love your style and characterization ^ ^