I would like it very much if that story would be continued with because I want to see what the four are up too and hope no one ends up with Akane.

I hope you update this soon. I like the interaction between the R. Saotome Siblings. Maybe you should allow anonymous reviews too. I am certain you would get more. Hope that is really going to be a Nabiki matchup for the elder "Ran" Ranma. Why not name him Ryu or something, but Ran is ok too. The Tendo pledge where gone and and the younger Ranma can maybe get Ukyou or Shampoo, but I more for the former, if any.
I would really love to see more about the new four siblings.

The personalities don't quite fit.

I'm not sure abought the shampoo idea. It seems
a little far fetched even for the ranmaverse.
Loved the rest of the chapter. Great ending.

Cool chapter. What was the name of the story
you are continuing?

You went way too fast. This should have taken place over at least three chapters. Other then that Good work! You write it I'll read it.

AAhh... logging in is annoying. I at least pu my e-mail address in the review anyway.

The story, is somewhat traditional, and yet it likely does have potential, provided Ranma doesn't stay stuck in Nerima.

There could be many possibilities for a more mature Ranma(like putting him in the Wheel of Time series :) )

If he just stays around to fix things though...

Where the fiances are concerned. IMO he's the normal Ranma is too young and undeveloped to marry. He needs years to mature(preferably without his father or the Nerimites around to keep him to his old patterns)

Plus, i don't really like the concept of him marrying any of the current fiances :) not unless they mature too.

Also it is my opinion that the curse likely damaged Ranma's mind. I can imagine, what would happen if i believed deep down to a sub-conscious level that women are exponentially weak, and then became one(the mental scream itself would likely be felt for blocks :) )

Basically i think that Ranma is more arrogant without the curse though.

Not that i'm sure how useful that'll be here.

Anyway, and xover with KOF, or SF might be nice.

And i think that you made him powerful a little faster than you should have(1 year shouldn't be enough... of course, achieving immortality and looking 1 year older is acceptable).

Incidentally, about Ryouga. This is the guy who tried to use the Bakusai Tenketsu technique to blow apart Ranma's skull. It was just Ranma's good luck that the technique didn't work that way, and that Cologne hadn't taught him something more powerful. Ryouga as far as i remember from canon(ancient memories), isn't all that honorable. Just look at his annoying Ranma by sleeping with his fiance, even if it is in pig form.

Still, how portray him is your choice, since you're the writer... best change some of the past though(a footnote on the issue will suffice if you don't want to bother with lengthy descriptions).

Well, that's all for now.

Take Care,

hope you're well,

and hope to see more of your fic.

i like the story so far, but what was the name of the origonal story at N/R.com.

I like this story very much and I hoep you will update it really soon.