this is a great story!!I love the pairing and idea of this fanfic! it has a great plot! EVERY WELL DONE!!
Now, its time to read the sequel! ^^
Byez!
Bethany

Well, as i promised, here's my review, great fanfic by the way, one of the better in this fandom. Though, Orphen made me want to kick his sorry ** a lot of times, but kick it hard.

Good job!

i just finished the story...B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!
you pased it so well built up all the drama but on one thing i did not like is the way they confessed i always imagined it to be in a humor way while they fight an it slip out an they both deny it 2 cute but your way did just fine i thought orphen was kinda out of character he seened to nice in the confession i imaagined him 2 scream it an deny it also he seemed to gental but either wat B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!

Very nice! I just finished watching the 1st season of Orphen a little while ago and was left somewhat unsatisfied with the lack of exploration into Cleo's connection with Leki. I always thought it'd be interesting if Cleo, pairing up with Leki, could step up to be an important part in combat, rather than looking from the side all the time. Your story did just that, and I applaud you for it.

Beside some minor spelling and grammar errors, the story is cleverly woven and believable. I also like the interaction and the involvement of the whole cast, human and non-human alike. Greatly enjoyable. Time to move on to the next instalment of the Hunter Saga!

OMG! Teaser, teaser, teaser...it's off to the next story for me!

Yeah, that wasn't very elequent like my usuall reviews, but you can't blame a busy college girl that needs some long-awaited Cleo/Orphen-ness.

I absolutely love the first part, and I'm so excited about the second...and the third part! Get working, woman! (Yes, college has made me crazy)

Yay! Orphen and Cleo are reunited. And it feels so good!

They admitted their feelings. And it feels even better!

Lovely ending, you really put together a lot of pieces of the puzzle, and left a few new pieces out for part two. Genius! This part has been brilliantly written: the alliances are back, and all that good stuff, and we are left with a few peaceful moments before the adventure will continue!

Bah! I can't even explain how much loved it! You really are just that talented when it comes to plot bunnies, and the like.

Can't wait for part two; I'm left wondering how Garik is going to get stronger.

Great job!

Wow! Woman you really are a master writer.

I must be evil myself because I loved this chapter. Lots of action! Love the action! Need more action!

Garik is one smart blood demon, he figured out Cleo's weakness--Orphen. That was cruel, but wonderfully written.

See, you almost left me speechless

Happily addicted,

Rin Seren

Loved it!

I love how you wrote Orphen in this chapter--he's uber angsty and trying to resolve his problems via the bottle. I thought that was rather intelligent of you to include the root beer float/actual beer part. It's so simple, but I would never have thought of it.

Even though I knew Cleo was alive (because I've read this thing a million times) I still get choked up reading about Orphen's mourning: Drunk, slapped, angsty, etc, etc, etc... It's not something we would expect from Orphen yet somehow we know him capable of these reactions, so it's good to see that someone took the initiative to put Orphen through Hell--Hallelujah

Okay, I'm finished with my incoherent ramblings of the day...

Can't wait for more Cleo/Orphen action! Tata!

I knew you were evil, but this...this is completely awesome!

I really loved this chapter, and not because our angsty-boy Orphen admitted his feelings, but because it was devilishly brilliant!

I also like how you approached the subject of Azalie--the question was bound to come up eventually. The fact that you didn't belittle Azalie shows that you're a mature writer, and like Hartia and Orphen I agree that Azalie is an important person to Orphen, but only in that sisterly-like affection.

Look out for more random reviews from me, your ~favorite~ and incredibly talented reviewer.

Hey, it's me. Long time no review, eh?

I know I've told you this a thousand times, but--I love this story! (My goal is to tell you that another 9 times.)

Seems like Agan is still up to his old tricks, but I love his evilness. And poor defenseless Hartia, he's going to busted by a jealous Orphen again. (Although, jealousy is a good look for Orphen, it suits him well.)

Sweet Orphen/Cleo sleepwalking joy! It's like music to my ears!

Now that was a completly random review!

As always, this is a wonderful chapter! I'm really enjoying everything you've written about the hunters and their relationships with the Heavenly Ones and Tower of Fang, etc. It'll be really interesting to see how your hunter plot unfolds.

By the way, any chapter that has Orphen, Cleo, and a bath in it makes me happy--Squee! Yeah, I'm starting to get delusional. Cleo sleep walking is always a fun thing to read, too! (I'm such a bad girl)

Anyways, I better submit this review and move onto the next chapter before I lose my brain.

Somehow I forgot to review this chapter--how horrible! I want to make sure I go back and review every single chapter with a detailed review because your story deserves it. I'm completely in love with it.

I'm sure Orphen's ready to "K some A" and I can't wait until he does. It's unfortunate that Volcan has to be the one to get the Orphen beating, hopefully Agan's time is coming. Squee!

Keep up the great work, darling!

"but he'd always been able to protect her, despite all of the trouble she got them into." I'd say that's another line that explains the entire Orphen/Cleo relationship. Orphen and Cleo have an unconditional love that's based on trust, caring, and protecting (especially for Orphen when it comes to protecting Cleo.)

"'My Cleo would never lie to me'" Major squee factor, and major Oprhen characterization here. Sure, he's never said or really thought the words "my cleo" (until now) but there's a kind of over-protective, quasi-needy, possessiveness that Orphen projects on a regular basis. (I know, my ramblings arn't very coherent right now) I'm just glad to see that he's finally realizing, and admitting that he has a "claim" on Ceo.

I just realized how much like Dr. Phil Hartia is--don't ask. I mean, Hartia is one of my favorite characters, too. He's not exactly the "last-resort-guy" but the guy everyone's going to turn too. Hmm, I'm having trouble explaining this. We all know that Cleo, Orphen, and Magik are going to end up making mistakes down the road--that's obvious, but that's why we have Hartia to swoop in and fix things up, or at least be there to slap some sense into Orphen before everything falls apart. I'm sure you understand what I'm saying. You really just can't help but love Hartia. *swoon*

Okay, I rambled yet again. I hope you don't mind. I could probably go on rambling at the genius of your writing, but I'll save it for my next review--And yes, you're writing is very clear and ingenius!

Great suspense at the end of this chapter.

Also, the exhange between Orphen and Hartia was especially written well. I feel that those couple sentences that Hartia spoke to Orphen really shed light on what is Cleo and Orphen's relatinoship. Confused? I mean , Orphen genually cares for his friends, but there's a different sort of caring that he has for Cleo, which is why we all love the Cleo/Orphen fandom. Anyways, both characters are very stubborn and it would take someone like Hartia to point out when the other needs to stop acting like an **, and reveal how much they really do care for eachother--which is shown when Orphen finally runs off to see Cleo.

Ayways, I'm rambling, but I got a lot of different things from thost sentences, plus I think it's the first "official" time in your story that Orphen outwardly shows that he cares, albiet hesitantly.

Wonderful chapter like always.

Oh, the Cleo/Orphen tension is building up; you gotta love the UST.

"Wasted! You bastard!" Squee...I love how defensive Hartia is being of Cleo, because it causes so much jealousy in our poor soreror. Once again, Squee!

Great work, keep the updates and everything coming!