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| mina jacobs 2007-04-02 ch 4, | abuseaplaud that is good! |
| Lizzy 2004-11-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseLove it, can't wait for more. |
| gigi246 2004-05-26 ch 3, | abuseit is so good, please keep updating... just watch the grammar and spelling |
| gigi 2004-05-26 ch 4, anon. | abusegosh this was so great, please update soon |
| saz7777777 2004-05-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseyou so better make more! it is really really good so far so hurry up please! and i hate it when people make me wait^^ |
| ParkerEvanss 2004-03-29 ch 4, | abuseHe's there- cool :) Please show how he found her and what the rest of the Roswell gang are doing- I hope they came with him. Was that the baddie she had her vision about? I can't wait to read his reaction to the state she's in. And please, please, keep in mind grammar and spelling- it can add so much to a fic. And I'm still offering to beta if you want me to. Thanks for taking the time to put your ideas to screen and for being willing to post it. It takes guts and I appreciate it. I look forward to reading more :) |
| ParkerEvanss 2004-03-29 ch 3, | abuseSo, was that a vision? Are her alien powers kicking in? Is Max going to tell the others what he's seen and convince them to find her? What have the others been up to? Have they ever tried to find her? What made Liz decide she had to leave Roswell? What was the introductions like when she met Buffy's friends, and what have they been doing? What about Angel? How did he take Buffy dying again? Are you going to make it so that Buffy can come back again? Because I really like the whole Angel-Buffy thing and always love it when they wind up together. And I look forward to the Roswell gang meeting Liz's new Sunnydale gang- the whole inferiority complex/jealousy/working into a team thing to fight some major baddie should be fun. And, just my opinion, Maria would make an awesome witch. Please keep CC, at least at the end. When Max finds her, there can be some total misunderstanding regarding her and some guy who she's not interested in but who is interested in her. Just some ideas. :) |
| ParkerEvanss 2004-03-29 ch 2, | abuseDefinitely, definitely continue :) Just please, get it betaed. If you want me to, I would be willing to do it for you. I just think it would add so much to your already awesome story. I'm loving the action, Max, Faith, and the connection. I am totally looking forward to reading more. :) |
| ParkerEvanss 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm really interested in it so far. You have good action and good contemplation. The only suggestion that I have for you is to watch your grammar and spelling more- I'm guessing that you probably weren't because it was only a taste of what you might write if people are interested. But I think you might be cheating yourself by not making sure that your taste-of-a-fic is correctly spelled with proper grammar because when things are not spelled correctly it makes a fic harder to read and then people won't feedback as well as they might have otherwise. And this is really starting out well, so I would hate to think that you're not getting the appreciative feedback that you deserve. Anyway, that's my two bits. I really look forward to reading more of your work :) |
| SeahSlade 2004-03-20 ch 4, | abuseawesome.. it's a little confusinf cuz its going be so fast.. maybe try slowing it down a little and make chapters longer if you can! Update soon! |
| anonymous 2004-03-19 ch 4, anon. | abusethat was also great...! please update soon with more chapters please...! please with longer and more chapters every time you update please...! please!! please! please update soon with more chapters! |
| kirbs 2004-03-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseawesome story, love both buffy and roswell and i think its a great crossover...please please please update soon please :) |
| anonymous 2004-03-16 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was sso...! good! that was great...! so please update soon...! |
| luwee 2003-11-28 ch 3, anon. | abusenice update soon |
| pru 2003-09-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is a great story. Will there be new chapters added. Will the rest of the pod squad and the people from angel and buffy be in it. |