This story was addicting! Great job! The characterization was really well done. I like how you added that little "bonus track". I also really loved how you described Harry's mind when Hermione entered his head. Very creative. All in all, amazing work, 10/10, five stars, whatever you want. Perhaps a hug? *hug* :)

Brilliant. By far the best trial scene ever written in HP fanfiction.

Now that I reread that, it probably doesn't sound like much. But it was fantastic. Well done.

This is shaping up to be one of the best HP fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. Considering it's age, that's another achievement in itself.

scaryisntit

too angsty for my taste. perhaps I'll read it completely at a later date.

I enjoyed your story overall, although I found it tedious a few times (not a huge fan of angst). Kept me interested, and I'm glad I stumbled across it!

You write well, and the plot was interesting. Very few people can write any good stories so far post Hogwarts.

one very easy way to shut harry up and make him see truth
get hermione and the weaslys in to tell him
they can also tell him that either he accepts hes wrong and it did really happen and he might have a mental issue
or he can choose to believe that the 10 people in his life that are clostest to him that he considrs family would make up a horrific story for no reason whatsoever that after all theese years they suddenly hate him just beccause he wants to be right abouut what happened in which case he really is crazy and he is beyond help and they may as well not bother with him but just leave him locked up untill h egets over himself and decides to accept the facts

Love the socks!

Btw, Harry exclaimed "Lucius Malfoy!" when it's supposed to be Draco.

Wow...great writing. And very intriguing.
Onto the next chapter! :)

I have to say I skipped lots of parts of this fic as I have the emotional range of a teaspoon at times and it's currently like 5 AM here and I'm tired xD. But the ending is beautiful and really brings the story to a nice conclusion, I will however say one thing HARRY NEEDS TO /WRISTS MORE!! he needs to let his emoness flow out of his body.
Seriously though, great fic :)

What a sad but wonderful story. This illuminated thought the main weakness of canon, that Harry was never happy. he had moments but nothing sustained. No one ever chose Harry, what was best for him, still no one has. he deserves someone who will chose him. Even now at the end of your story its very melancholy, as he knows he will eventually lose what he has now and will probably outlive Dana. With all his power he will still be in his prime ala Dumbles when she gets old and passes on.

An interesting and well written story. Well done.

I can honestly say that it is the only story I've ever read four times. And I can add to that honesty to say that I have been hoping for another story, or any story that you have written. And I can ad to the added honesty that I would wet my pants if there were to be rumors of another story from you. With that added honesty, I think I would get a heart attack if there were to be another story suddenly appearing on the internet from you.

To sum up, brilliant work and I am encouraging you to write more. If I can do ascII art, i would draw an encouraging face for you to encourage you to write some more.

If, for any reason, you cannot (or dont want to) write more, then I leave you with this, "After seven years of reading fan fiction, I still haven't found a story as good this one."

You might not have noticed it, but when you talked about Malfoy, Harry said first Lucius Malfoy but when he walked into the cell it was obvious that the Malfoy was Draco..you might want to change that, Lucius is probably dead right?

AMAZING! This was the most just gah! Wonderful story!

Hi, there
I finished this story few weeks ago and now I am rereading it. I thought this story was great and now I still do. Thank you for this great fiction.

“A sacrifice like this is given a choice.”


Well... you certainly got that point right!! ;-)

Fun!