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| Howard Russell 2006-11-02 ch 4, | abuseA very fun fic. I like the non-standard assignments of senshi identities. Still, I think Nodoka's reactions to the curse revelation and her accidental reunion with her son could have been explored a bit more. |
| angel61991 2006-01-27 ch 4, | abuseinteresting story so far please update soon. |
| Paver83 2006-01-16 ch 4, | abuseGood story. I think you could have milked Nodoka finding out she had the real Ranma a bit more though. I wonder if you'll have Ranma take up sorcery? That would be interesting. Since your interpretation of Ranma is smart, sorcery may be a good idea; sure to freak out Genma (always a good thing). |
| Tatsu-ZZmage 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abusehehehe. As long as its entertaining i'll read it ^_^ |
| Shakeval 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abusewell minako is a sorcerer, guess lina could have an apprentice or someone to teach a few things to now. wonder how minako will like getting the extra boost? well good chapter and hope for more soon. |
| Garahs 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseThis story doesn't look too bad so far. My only complaints are that Ryoga really shouldn't get permanently stuck as a girl. Ranma being able to fly DBZ style is kind of weak in my opinion. If it was that easy, then more characters would have figured it out by now. Most noticably, Genma, Happosai, and Ku Lon (Cologne). Other than that, it's looking pretty nice. |
| Dumbledork 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseNice story. Will male Ranma learn magic too (I'd like to see him use the Dragon Slave)? |
| AshK 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseI like the story so far. Keep up the good work. Are you going to have Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in this story too? What a bout Tuxedo Kamen(Mask)? Anyway great work so far. Sincerely, AshK |
| Innortal 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseNot bad, looking forward to seeing how Nodoka handles the truth. |
| Dragon Man 180 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseWill Ranma be learning some magic from Kaoru later to supplement her Senshi magic? I know there are some awesome ice based spells in the Slayers spell book... |
| Dragon Man 180 2005-09-20 ch 3, | abuseI can't wait to see the Ranma gang in Senshi get up. Will Akane find out Ryouga used to be P-chan? If Lina really wants to kill Shabranigdo she should jump in Ranma's face before the final battle and let Neko-Senshi-Ranma-chan take him out! Nodoka's family is definitly wierd, but what else is new in Ranma's life? |
| tatsu 2005-09-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseLOL (Nodoka’s family is descended from Sylphiel and Gourry) poor poor ranma that would explane his mother though. tell me if this is a bad mental picture a sailor suited ranma holding a shotgun for a magic weapon proclaming this is my BOOM stick, your villans name for some odd reason makes me think of evil dead. |
| Really Bad Fanfiction 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuse"supposed to of been" should be supposed to HAVE been, moron. Damn, I despise that stupid mistake with every fiber of my being. Never do that again. That includes "should have," "would have," and "will have." NEVER "of." Also it's Morrigan. I don't know who Moregan is, but I'm pretty sure that's a mistake rather than a new character. |
| DarkRubberNeck 2005-09-20 ch 3, | abuseOh I love these twists to Ranma's family. The mind is such and interesting thing, even though the body might be the wrong gender, the mind tells the person what gender they are and they seek to fix it. Still it would suck to be stuck as the wrong gender. |
| Slade13 2005-09-20 ch 3, | abuseinteresting still, and leaves me wanting more. not the best on the net, but you've done a great job... so what is going to happen when ranma and co. have to change? till next... |