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| oh.bonita 2008-02-26 ch 23,  | abusegreat job!! |
| just here to review...... 2008-02-17 ch 23, anon. | abuseAWESOME story!one of the Best I have ever read!I really want to know what happens next!Please please update soon wish ya luck!^_^ |
| Janneia 2007-07-26 ch 23, | abuseAn interesting concept, storyline, and plot... it's an intriguing story and I do hope you'll find the time to finish it off someday. :D And you cut off at such a cliffhanger too... :\ |
| Blue Nariko 2007-07-10 ch 14, | abusecool |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 19, | abuseAh, so it comes back to a choice, eh? How disappointing for Sasuke... |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 18, | abuseAh yes, I had a feeling the second part of the scroll might be something like this when it was first mentioned. So there's a way to revive her. |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 17, | abuseOkay, I think I know what's reality and what's not. And I think that none of this is particularly reality. Guess I'll have to keep reading to see if I'm right or not. |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 16, | abuseUnless she gets help quick, she's going to die. I get the feeling she can't for this story to continue, though. So, the guy Sakura killed wasn't the same one that took Naruto, right? |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 15, | abuseHm...wouldn't all the bloodloss the impaled man sustained have killed him? You pass out after too much is lost...but I suppose it could be argued that he's a ninja, and his body is accustomed to bloodloss, so he wouldn't pass out until he died. |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 14, | abuseOoh, interesting last line. Bloodline, perhaps? |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 13, | abuseOh, so they're trying to find Naruto on their own? I'm surprised they didn't go for help... |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 12, | abuseHm...Akatsuki, perhaps? If they are 20, why are they still chuunin? |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 11, | abuseThis is happening somewhere in Konoha? How did these ninjas get in so easily? |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 10, | abuseIt's funny how Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke are all connected in the way they hide their feelings. |
| Itallia 2007-05-05 ch 9, | abuseI'm surprised Sasuke didn't figure out that Sakura's bleeding too much to be healthy when he was having those flashbacks. I like how he is the only one who's realized that Naruto hides how he really feels and what he really thinks. |