 Rocketto Neko 4/23/03 . chapter 1I apoligize, first off, for not reading as much as I should be. ;; I suppose when you spend a long period of time without reading anything, it doesn't seem as necessary. And then you come back, and the section has expanded so much, and you have to catch up... *Ahem*. This was, as usual, refreshing and clear, perhaps now even more so than with other fics of yours, since it was (gasp) centered around Orphen rather than Majic. _;; You write him very well, you know. Unlike a lot of people, you kept it realistically calm. An interesting parallel to the Azalie/Childman situation, even more interesting relationship between Orphen and Majic, and a very sweet ending. No stressing out. Very smooth. _ ;; Once again, sorry-sorry-sorry-ness for not reviewing. And. x.x; Was it your birthday? I need to be up on these things... Ahem. Before I forget. Good luck with 'Illusions', if you're still frustrated. We all know what it's like to be bogged down by (or at least irritated by) a fic in progress... either it will wake up again, if it feels dead, or it won't. I'm out of date, but it seemed good when I read it whiles ago. -; This is too long a review. Eh. To get back on topic: Overall, this fic was quite delicious..! Keep it up! |