hey the stories are great but could you hurry up with chapter9 onwards!

YOU TWP GOING FOR THE BEYBLADE COMPETITIONS ON THE 5&6?OF JULY

hey, i noe it's a little late to review a chppie 10... But this story is awesome! Really it is! Though i'm no seasoned writer nor a wiz at writing not to mention real sucky and totally embarrasingly pathetic ideas, i can, anyone can see that this fic hasthe potential to become as you said in chappie 2(i think), an epic. When i first saw 3,2,1...Go Shoot!! i thought it was because this focoused on a new generation and i thought it was a new stlye. WAIT! KEEP ON READING! I HAVE NO GRUDGE AGAINST THAT! But after seeing your umm, 'enlightening lecture' meant for anonymous, i got it. Hey, i salute you for using the japanese version and i agree with you on the fact that the dubs DO SUCK TERRIBLY!! SUBS ARE WAY BETTER THAN DUBS! I dun mind raw anime either.. except that my jap is only basic one... But occasionally you get subs that suck equally as the dubs, for instance, umm, since you used Rurouni Kenshin as an example i trust you've seen it, let's say (this didnt happen) Kaoru shouts Kenshin's name when they re seperated , and it translates into something like: I love you!! or I'll never forget you! "It's amazing how japanese can cram a sentence in english to just a word in japanese" was what my neighbour commented...--;; you get the idea.. any way, this story really rocks! carry on!

(Looks at the amount she just typed)
Got to stop ranting...

Signing out!

Keep on writing! This is great.

it's 3! 2! 1! let it rip!not go shoot you idiot!

chapter 5 was disgusting!you made Rei and Kai gay!but every thing else was o.k i guess.but do not ever make any one gay again!it will drive away your readers!1

YOU IDIOT!~!~ *WACKWHAMMABAMBASHKICKPUNCHA-BISH!~!* WHY THE *BLEEP* DIDN'T YOU TELL ME ABOUT THIS!? *mumblegrumblemumblegrumblemumblegrumble* *wonders whether she's co-writing this fic... -.-* Seems more like a no... BAKA!~ *WACK* I'm gonna write my own version and I don't care about this!~

Lillian: Hi! I agree, Ken deserves the Dragoon... He's kinda like Tyson... A bit smarter may be... (*dodges the blade that Tyson's daughter throws at her*)
Lime: COOL CHAPTER! ME WANTS MORE!!
Lillian: I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!

Cool story!

Lillian: Hey, you updated very soon! Hum, so Rei is their trainer? How cute!
Lime(*dreaming*): WHEN IS KAI GOING TO APPEAR? I LIKE A LOT KAI/REI AND I'M DYING TO SEE (WELL, READ) ABOUT IT!!
Lillian: Too much sugar again... Anyway, I want to read it too!
Both: See ya soon! ;P :3

Surprises! I like surprises and the appearance of Rei surely gave me one surprise... anyway.. good story but too short ! I wanna read more! Please update!

YOU IDIOT!~ *Wacks Toraneko on the head... HARD.* DAMNIT! You took the bloody combination from what I did the last time didn't you!? *Deathglares* And don't you dare go crawling to 'Tousan for protection you lousy niichan! *Kicks him to kingdom come* Anyway, at LEAST you bothered to credit me for the help... ^^;; Gomen, Anyway, just continue or I'll have your @$$ for dinner soon!~

"Love":

Your darling little imoutou.

P.S:

Don't you DARE run away the next time I see you or it'll be your HEAD rolling on the ground next. *Looks at rolling ball* ^^; That's all. Jya~

This one has interesting momentum building for it. I'd like to see how this one fares. Keep up the work.

Lillian: Firts of all, thank you very much for dedicating the chappy to us! We're not gonna risk it trying to login because it took 7 minutes for this window to load. Now that I had said that, on with the review!
Lime (*sweatdropping at Lil*): YAY!! YOU UPDATED! ME LIKE CHAPPY! ME WANNA ONE MORE! PWEASE? UPDATY?? (*tries to look like a child*)
Lillian: OK, now I can say that it's a good fic. But, risking to repeat myself, I cannot emit a better opinion than "I REALLY LOVE IT!" without having another chappy!
Chibi Lime (*don't know how but she's now chibied*): PWEASE, ME WANNA OTHER CHAPPY! UPDATE PWEASE!
(*runs to chase poor Kai all over the room*)
Lillian: Eh... You get the picture, don't you? We like it a lot and we would love to read more chappies, so please update soon! ;3

Nice story so far. If you keep it up i might review. One thing though you never really identified the oppenent tyson was battling, is it Tala? 'cause that's who tyson ends up fighting. Sorry it's your story don't let me ruin it. Keep Writing it's great really.

Both: Hi! Nice starting!

Lime: BUT, UNFORTUNATELY, TOO SHORT TO SAY ANYTHING MORE ABOUT IT...
Lillian: What means that if you want us to give a better opinion than 'WE LOVE IT!', you'll have to update ASAP.
Lime: YAY!! HOPE YOU GOT THE PICTURE (*tries to look innocent without too much success*)
Lillian: By the way, we're first reviewers, so you have to do what we're asking for! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Lime: EM... NOW SHE'S SCARING ME! OK, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. WE LIKED A LOT THE STARTING!