 lace 2009-07-31 . chapter 1 i am so confused. i got to chapter 3, which is actually good for this story, i must say.
good story here, but you lost me. there's a lot of careless mistakes that make you actually have to stop and try to comprehend for a few moments. great plotline, but you REALLY need a beta.
-lace |
 bananacupcakes 2009-07-30 . chapter 7Please continue :)
did you know that you have sections repeating themselves at the end there? |
 faith bonksie 2009-06-11 . chapter 7oh poor harry and remus
please continue soon It has me waiting for more. |
 Nyx - Goddess of Dreams 2008-08-01 . chapter 4lol yfes |
 MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-07-09 . chapter 7update soon |
 leesh1012 2008-07-04 . chapter 5cool! Can't wait 4 an update |
 Klingsor the great 2008-04-07 . chapter 7In which way did Harry hurt Minerva and Albus's feelings? |
 Laura 2008-03-17 . chapter 7 WHAT? the last bit was supa confusing. apart from that i am loing this story! thankyou!! |
 Laura 2008-03-17 . chapter 4 1. Yeah, Harry would need to get in troubl once. Time out sounds best but maybe some spanking (but only a little and if its resonable)
3. No, snape should be mean )canon)
5. YES! Mrs weasley would be great for this story and Harry could make frinds with Ron even earlier. :)
Great story so far i love it! THANX! |
 shiftyless 2007-11-01 . chapter 7Love your fic. most excellent, poor Harry & definately poor Remus, I love how Harry calls Severus Sevy quite cute really.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, update when you can, want 2 find out
what happens next. |
 MoonRose91 2007-08-09 . chapter 7Update when you can! I REALLY like your story! |
 hayley 2007-07-23 . chapter 7 will not instead of want |
 hayley 2007-07-23 . chapter 4 harry should wonder off and snape find him oh and scared onley has one r |
 hayley 2007-07-23 . chapter 3 okay cute story but you need to work on the grammer and its apperate not evaporate |
 Noa 2007-04-30 . chapter 7 One of my favorite stories! :)... hope you come out with more chapters soon... |