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lace
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
i am so confused. i got to chapter 3, which is actually good for this story, i must say.
good story here, but you lost me. there's a lot of careless mistakes that make you actually have to stop and try to comprehend for a few moments. great plotline, but you REALLY need a beta.
-lace
bananacupcakes
2009-07-30 . chapter 7
Please continue :)
did you know that you have sections repeating themselves at the end there?
faith bonksie
2009-06-11 . chapter 7
oh poor harry and remus
please continue soon It has me waiting for more.
Nyx - Goddess of Dreams
2008-08-01 . chapter 4
lol yfes
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY
2008-07-09 . chapter 7
update soon
leesh1012
2008-07-04 . chapter 5
cool! Can't wait 4 an update
Klingsor the great
2008-04-07 . chapter 7
In which way did Harry hurt Minerva and Albus's feelings?
Laura
2008-03-17 . chapter 7
WHAT? the last bit was supa confusing. apart from that i am loing this story! thankyou!!
Laura
2008-03-17 . chapter 4
1. Yeah, Harry would need to get in troubl once. Time out sounds best but maybe some spanking (but only a little and if its resonable)
3. No, snape should be mean )canon)
5. YES! Mrs weasley would be great for this story and Harry could make frinds with Ron even earlier. :)
Great story so far i love it! THANX!
shiftyless
2007-11-01 . chapter 7
Love your fic. most excellent, poor Harry & definately poor Remus, I love how Harry calls Severus Sevy quite cute really.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, update when you can, want 2 find out
what happens next.
MoonRose91
2007-08-09 . chapter 7
Update when you can! I REALLY like your story!
hayley
2007-07-23 . chapter 7
will not instead of want
hayley
2007-07-23 . chapter 4
harry should wonder off and snape find him oh and scared onley has one r
hayley
2007-07-23 . chapter 3
okay cute story but you need to work on the grammer and its apperate not evaporate
Noa
2007-04-30 . chapter 7
One of my favorite stories! :)... hope you come out with more chapters soon...
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