Hmm...good, but you might want to work on exposition a bit more. I was confused on how much the girls knew about the others and demons and stuff. I was also a bit lost on the relationships between the girls and the others. I'd definitely read more if you posted, though. ^_~ Okay, ttyl.

Hey I'm really new to this anime so can anyone help me out here with this Yu Yu Hakusho I this that's how you spell it.

this is a good fanfic.

Funny Hiei is the best besides Kurama:)