That was so sad. It remind me of my parents' divorce. I am not offended by it. It happens all the time when kids are young. I was seven and a half when my parents divorce. Hopeful the girls could find a way to deal with this and move on like I did.

So far so good. I hope you know the princess viz's name is latin meaning 'namely'.

That was good, poor Zim though.

cute story. ^.^ It's not like the way it is in the show (One of the unmade episodes somewhat explained how smeets were born..er, "created"), But I like it.

Aw. The end was kinda sad. I feel sorry for the girls.