i am juz so jealous.. you write v v v v v v beautiful love stories! wah! BEAUTIFUL

That was very powerful, very beautiful, and very well written. Hats off to you and your partner. Lovely writing!

If I had to give some constructive criticism on this story I would say that some of the things they said made no sense, well to me, like when Aragorn says, "I don't know how to explain". What doesn't he know how to explain, and why has he suddenly changed his mind and wants her forgiveness? And then Arwen says, "We have every reason to get through, Aragorn." That is just sort of a random comment and what does it mean? It doesn't make much sense in context to what they are saying.

Maybe it is just me, but I thought some parts of it were a little confusing. Just some things to think about for your next story. Good Luck...

NghtOwl113

Wow that was so powerful. It was really beautifully written and is how Ive always hoped the scene in the film would continue.

Thanks very much for writing this, u should write together again!

Love Kaz

xx

My highest and most lavish praises to the Lady Navana and the Lady Silraen. You both have captured the true love between Aragorn son of Arathron,a mortal man, and the lovely Arwen Undomeil, blessed eternal star of the Eldar Kindred. It is this love that you have painted a picture of with words that one misses in the epic movies. This love, between one who is doomed to die and one who choses to die, is the strongest kind of love. This love goes deeper than the sundering seas, it is the ever burning light in the lightless abyss of death, it is the binding between two starcrossed lovers that cannot be broken nor shaken. Again I give my highest and most lavish praises to the Lady Navana and the Lady Silraen. You are both extremely talented, keep painting with words for that is truely your gift. May Narsil's edge be ever keen. May the light of the Evenstar never wax nor wane.May the Valar protect,Namaire.

dana, i love ur story...it is so good...hey read my stories there on the new fanfiction site...hope u enjoy.

ur friend,

theresa

*sob* that was so beautiful! Very well written and you wrote the extension of that part in the movie very well. I imagine if it had been longer then it would have gone just like that. Gorgeous!

Beatiful! You write v. good :) You show how stronge and great their love is, wondreful :)

Very, very well written after my opinion

the detail this story holds is amazing ur words are very powerful...great story i hope u continue writing u've got a lot of talent