Aw, very sweet I loved it. You so made me love AJ in this...which by they way is very hard to do...Good job.

Wow! Thata all i have to say. You take my breath away. As always, every story you write. I am amazed. WOW!

No..No... NO

This was not enough... I want to see what happens with AJ.. I know all that he is, but I want him to find redemption... simply put, I don't want this story to end..

I knew anything of yours with more than one chapter would be sure to blow me away. Oh my, was I right... I don't know how I missed this sooner, but I'm so glad I found it...there aren't enough words for how much I love your style..

and BTW, if you haven't figured it out yet, I absolutely LOVE this story...

Damn! Each one of your fics I read is better than the last. You just took three characters I'm not all that interested in (not counting AJ - I've always adored him) and made me fall head over heels.

Not to mention it was hot as all hell. Brava -Elizabeth

Love your take on adolescent angst. This was so right on: "She was the one, not Lucas, in danger of a diabetic coma," and yet she still has the girlish innocence to cross her fingers behind her back when she lies.

And this: "the momentum of her body slamming into his was like flint and steel. The pyromaniac couldn't help but let the spark turn into fire" was great sexy, dangerous stuff.

I guess Barbara Jean wasn't messing around when she decided to go bad. Back alley sex at Jake's is pretty darn wanton.

I'm looking forward to more.

Okay, the pairings on this fic: slightly disturbing, but you've sucked me in anyway.

I love the Coleman/Lorena backstory/conversation, and this was great:

"I am NOT a virgin! And I am NOT underage!."

"You ain't careful and somebady's gonna make at least one of those lies the truth."

I also really liked Coleman calling Maxie "Miss Max." Something about that fit the character of Coleman perfectly.