wow now that was amazing. i wish i could write love stories as good as this one. hugh... im trying to but who knows how it will come out. anyways great story and i cant wait to read more of what you have writen.

keep writing,

sweetpeatea:P

aww

Eep! The cuteness! *flails*

I love it. -

Such a sweet story, and strangly coin operated boy goes well with it.

very very sweet

Aww! *makes disturbing cooing noise* How sweet! _

aww, how sweet.

Definately along the lines I was thinking after i watched that episode.

This is pretty good- it's very inspired. If you'd like to make yoru writing perfect, try reading On Writing, by Stephen King. He wrote a manual to help writers. Just a suggestion. But I love your take on Richieand Virgil.

KAWAII! Oh you had me so worried there when Ritchie got shot! I haven't seen that episode yet... but my God, I loved how you conveyed their love without words necessarily, just understanding. I never considered this pairing and then you go and make it a fav! You are an excellent writer; I'm not just saying that! I sincerely hope you continue to do more... and more and more and more and more and I think you get the point... The actions, the reactions, the hospital staff (grr) all were portrayed perfectly. You just have a knack for this pairing, a real inspiration. Keep going and good luck!

XD! XD! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LLOOVVEE IITT!

...Virgil stepped closer and saw that his friend's eyes were cosed. He smiled to himself and walked over and removed them...

I think that needs fixing. I'm assuming you meant removed his glasses, because otherwise...yuch. Friends don't remove friend's eyes!

Otherwise, I wuv it! Very cute and fluffy, all things considered. Bye!

aw! Kawaii! Of course I don't remember which episode you're talking about but, whatever. That was so cute!

really like your static shock story. hope you write more.

Cute one thing. This line:

"Virgil stepped closer and saw his friend’s eyes were closed. He smiled to himself and walked over and removed them.."

You probably meant to put the word glasses there, so I got what you were saying, but you should go back and fix it otherwise it sounds like you're saying Virgil is actually removing his friends eyes. Other than that it was a good fic.