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lscnobita
2004-10-02 . chapter 7
I know u probably wont believe me, but i have to say that this is basically what i think(or hope, since it's bloody obvious that ron likes herm) the trio's relationship will become.
However, i prefer it to be more angsty, and more reference to the "voldemort" issue, becoz that is what the HP story is mainly about, and also making the story more realistic.
Leah6
2004-03-26 . chapter 7
oh my gosh! i cant believe ive never reviewd this story! its been on my favs for like a year! i feel like such an idiot! im sorry! i thought ive reviewed this before! but anyway! its great! i love it! one of my favorite favs lol! i love your writing! -leah
Leah6
2003-10-26 . chapter 6
this was really good. i know ive already reviewed this, but hey!? doesnt everyone like multiple reviews? i know i do! lol. anyway...i really loved this story! it was on my favorites list and i was going through it and i remembered just how much i liked it! cant wait to read more of your wonderful writings! -leah
TheUnknown4
2003-08-01 . chapter 1
i really don't know what to say about this fic. I mean i've heard of this plot before and i've even thought it through to write it for myself but i would have never imagined it could have been written so well. The way you word things and express your ideas really capture me, making this story extremely addictive for me. The organization, the way it seems to be really thought out; I guess the only word i can think of for this piece is...Amazing!
Winta
2003-05-17 . chapter 7
This story is hilarious!! I'm actually laughing at loud, which I rarely do (especially when I'm reading something), and I love Harry's rambling, talking-to-himself POV. Bravo!
elana
2003-05-16 . chapter 7
WOW. Is there anything else I can say? just...wow(stares at screen) wow.
Grace
2003-05-03 . chapter 7
whoo hoo, this story rocks! I love it!
Harry's whole rambling on to himself is so very like me. I can't tell you how many time's I've started long-winded conversations with someone and it turns out i'm really thinking aloud...
Yami's Girl Forever
2003-05-02 . chapter 7
OH MY GOD!! I LOVE THIS STORY! Honestly I wasn't going to read it when I first saw it but I'm so glad I did. I love his internal monolaugues (I can't spell) they're pretty funny and they definetly let you know what he's thinking. I'm glad that you didn't make Ron a complete jerk also...that would really prevent a lot of good things from happening. I'm going to go look for some more of your stories...can't wait. Keep up the great writing!!
Animagus-Steph
2003-05-02 . chapter 7
Fantastic. I love the last line... And don't sweat the babbling Harry--I like him!

Animagus-Steph
athena73
2003-05-02 . chapter 7
I love this story! Good work. The first person perspective really made it interesting and fun to read.
Icklekins
2003-05-02 . chapter 7
Yes! I love the way you write. You put everything so...perfectly. It flows like any person would think. In fact, it is the way I think. I really think you have balls of steel, writing in a well known person's POV. You could get lots of rap from it, and yet, you did it SO WELL. I love your style, and I think that you should write books like this.

I LOVED IT!


Hannah
jandl
2003-05-02 . chapter 7
just writing one more time to tell you how much i loved your story and looked forward to each new installment. i'm really sad it's ending, but i guess everything has to end eventually. (it just seems like they're all ending at the same time, gr). i hope you write some more stories or add on unexpectedly to this one. i'll definetly read it. keep up the good work!
lots of love,
jandl
Ramy
2003-05-01 . chapter 7
I LOVE this story! The ending lines were priceless - "We're over that line, everything's in the open, and it's the greatest place I've ever been. I'll send you a postcard." LOL You are too good! I love your witty writing! I hope that you do get inspired to write more on this or perhaps yet another award-winning Harry/Hermione fanfic! You are on my favorite authors list! :)
VWChica
2003-05-01 . chapter 7
That was so great. Perfect ending. I loved the rambling that Harry was saying as the kissed. So great, so much like what a guy in love would be thinking on a first kiss.

Excellent story, it brought a smile to my face that just stuck throughout.
Takeda Lee
2003-05-01 . chapter 7
I loved it, it was amazing. I really loved the ending, great work on the story!
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