Hey, I meant to review this before, but I read it offline, so here is the review!!
Brilliant, well characterised etc. What does Narmo mean anyway?

I loved the story, but was not soon keen on how you turned Faramir into the villian. He is a valiant man and deserves to the respect he has earned.

I thought this story was excellent, it kept me gripped throughout. The language in the text was perfect; it never changed tense or period (You know what I mean... old style English etc) which helped maintain my interest. Of course, all the grammar was perfect.

The actual storyline was brilliant, too. There was tension, love, mystery and it also gave me that annoying, but gripping, feeling when YOU know Narmo and Legolas love each other but they don't know about it!

I think the best factor of this story which really set it apart was the flipping of narrative. I didn't once find it confusing, as instead it showed me both sides of the story and kept that niggling feeling of wanting to slap them both and yell at them to tell each other what they felt for one another!

All in all, brilliant, Grey. =)

Hi sydney! GR i'm soo mad no one else reads this >< i really do love it...you express Narmo's love for legolas in such a way it's like watching it...you show Narmo in the midst of death while still bringing her emotions and thoughts alive WOW and you think i'm a good writer...lol i love the depth and demesions you give the characters in a non-pic story "As he stepped into the dungeon of a bedchamber, the candlelight caught his features. His skin glowed radiant in the dim light strewn across his face. He looked as stern as an elfin warrior of old, but as he gazed across the inside of the cabin, I caught his eye, lying ashamedly on the bed, in my agony and surrender, utter, surrender. His features soften. He ran towards me and picked me up, cradling me in his arms." GREAT STUFF!

keep it coming syd i'll b here...and i'll be telling my friends to read this >< grr, there should b more reviews

Later with love-Ryan

hey there greyfaerie! it is i, the one they call el diablo! where there are heroes to be slain-I WILL BE THERE! where the fires from the depths of hell burns-I WILL BE THERE! where Harry Pothead smokes his magical bong-I PROBABLY WON'T BE THERE! well, i finally got to review your story, and i love it! you portrayed legolas so damn well. i'll try and review the other chaps asap. but right now i g2g. later! and catch me on aol im whenever you can!

Later Dayz-